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I don't know what to do
My heart is torn between two
And it can't take much more
Of the pain it's going through
I'm about to shatter
Into a thousand pieces
If things continue this way
Just make it stop
Somehow, someway
I have to chose
But no matter what
It's gonna hurt
And my heart can't take much more
It's been through hell
People have ripped it apart
And trampled on each piece
It is barely mended
And about to break at the seams
But I don't want
That kind of pain again
The kind that makes me cry so hard
I cannot sleep
The kind that makes me take razorblades
To my already scarred up skin
The kind that dissolves
My very soul
The kind that almost
Took my life before
I love each of them
Maybe one more than the other
But hurting them
Is worse than breaking myself
And now I don't know what to do
Somebody, let me out
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Somebody Help

Contributed by xXxFaygoFetishxXx on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Somebody help me
I don't know what to do
My heart is torn between two
And it can't take much more
Of the pain it's going through
I'm about to shatter
Into a thousand pieces
If things continue this way
Just make it stop
Somehow, someway
I have to chose
But no matter what
It's gonna hurt
And my heart can't take much more
It's been through hell
People have ripped it apart
And trampled on each piece
It is barely mended
And about to break at the seams
But I don't want
That kind of pain again
The kind that makes me cry so hard
I cannot sleep
The kind that makes me take razorblades
To my already scarred up skin
The kind that dissolves
My very soul
The kind that almost
Took my life before
I love each of them
Maybe one more than the other
But hurting them
Is worse than breaking myself
And now I don't know what to do
Somebody, let me out
Please, somebody help

Copyright © xXxFaygoFetishxXx ... [ 2005-04-27 23:31:35]
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Re: Somebody Help (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 27th April 2005 @ 11:48:03 PM AEST
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Sounds like u should take a break from both of them and get yourself together. If either of them luv u they will wait on u.
Good luvk.
huggs,
emy

Re: Somebody Help (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:47:47 PM AEST
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Hey thats quite the write Is it the category or a real cry. Coz I am lisening. I know how it feels all that. But hey ya gotta think of you first Ya got one heart but only one life and you got to the most of it. Pain and ***** all part of it . Memeries are kind and cruel. Chose which one is right for you.
Peace
Whisper

Re: Somebody Help (User Rating: 1 )
by midnightluna622 on Friday, 13th August 2010 @ 09:01:28 AM AEST
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i love this poem you wrote
but dont worry yourself things will get better okay?

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