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Array ( [sid] => 92533 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Demon Inside [time] => 2005-04-28 02:30:33 [hometext] => How far can hate take you..? [bodytext] => Standing alone, left in the corner
Prone to loneliness, empty inside
The only one left out, with no given pride

Beating down inside, my sanity
ready to subside, while the anger
tried to confide, seeping from my
veins, my heart trapped in chains

While a creature grew, made the hatred spew
Pulsating through, I tried so hard to subdue
Clenched up fists, While it dug deeper and
tried to persist

The thing within, continued to dig,
while the demon finally released
My body completely deceased
Controlled by the beast,While it came forth
ready to take it's feast. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 13 [informant] => justingunshin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 28 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Demon Inside

Contributed by justingunshin on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 02:30:33 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Standing alone, left in the corner
Prone to loneliness, empty inside
The only one left out, with no given pride

Beating down inside, my sanity
ready to subside, while the anger
tried to confide, seeping from my
veins, my heart trapped in chains

While a creature grew, made the hatred spew
Pulsating through, I tried so hard to subdue
Clenched up fists, While it dug deeper and
tried to persist

The thing within, continued to dig,
while the demon finally released
My body completely deceased
Controlled by the beast,While it came forth
ready to take it's feast.

Copyright © justingunshin ... [ 2005-04-28 02:30:33]
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Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:52:40 AM AEST
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wow thats a very dark dark poem.
You did really really well on this one.
awsome.

Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 06:13:57 AM AEST
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This was certainly haunting, very well writen Justin.
I enjoyed this dark write.

Jane~

Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:18:54 AM AEST
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whoo-hoo! great poem with such a great meaning behind it
well done, a masterpiece

Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:40:40 PM AEST
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I understand you perfectly.Hate can be all consuming if you let it take over.
Good write, I enjoyed reading it......I didn't hate any part !

Steve

Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 04:47:25 PM AEST
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That poem was amazing 8-|

Sure makes me glad that I don't really hate anything. *shudders at the thought*

If I did could you imagine the monster that would be inside me? *hides from self*

Anyways back to the poem... GREAT JOB

5 stars :D

Love ya,
~Kiela~

Re: Demon Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:00:09 AM AEST
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This is some good shi7.

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