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[aid] => mick
[title] => no one to save me
[time] => 2005-04-28 21:53:56
[hometext] => plz read and leave a comment... i dont know what to do...
[bodytext] => Swarming in my head so dense
Are cynical visions of death
My life just makes no sense
At times I long for my last breath
Living in a hole of lies
Nothing to save me from misery
With upward looking eyes
I lift my hands in blasphemy
Crying violently, I call out
Who is there to hear my voice?
No one is here to help me
Now life or death is my choice
Can someone please save me?
Tell me what to do
Maybe, if you help me see
I might listen to you
But will anyone take the time
To prevent my use of the knife
No one cares, the problem is mine
No one will save my life
[comments] => 9
[counter] => 203
[topic] => 36
[informant] => blue_angel
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[pollID] => 0
[score] => 23
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Suicide
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no one to save me
Contributed by
blue_angel
on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:53:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Swarming in my head so dense
Are cynical visions of death
My life just makes no sense
At times I long for my last breath
Living in a hole of lies
Nothing to save me from misery
With upward looking eyes
I lift my hands in blasphemy
Crying violently, I call out
Who is there to hear my voice?
No one is here to help me
Now life or death is my choice
Can someone please save me?
Tell me what to do
Maybe, if you help me see
I might listen to you
But will anyone take the time
To prevent my use of the knife
No one cares, the problem is mine
No one will save my life
Copyright ©
blue_angel
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2005-04-28 21:53:56]
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Re: no one to save me
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 09:58:02 PM AEST
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what heart-wrenching poetry and so pain-filled. i feel this exact same way everyday, i dont kno wat gets me thru and i also feel as if no one cares & i am all alone. the onli advice i can give u is to talk 2 some1 and tell them how ur feelin. its worth a shot but whatever u do dont hurt urself because i can tell ur a lovely person thru ur writing
i wish u lots of hope n keep writing! |
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Re: no one to save me
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by kitty_express2001 on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:00:21 PM AEST
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| This was a sad... but good poem... keep writing and I hope you find hope!! |
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Re: no one to save me
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:13:29 PM AEST
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IT IS NOT YOUR TIME TO DIE
I PRAYED TO HEAVEN TO FIND OUT WHY
YOU ARE DEALING WITH SUCH GRIEF
THE HEALING BEGINS WITH BELIEF
THE BELIEF THAT WE DO CARE
THAT TO HELP GUIDE YOU WE ALL SHARE
STAND TALL WITH YOUR HEAD HELD HIGH
I DO NOT WANT YOU TO DIE
THE VOICE
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Re: no one to save me
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:16:32 PM AEST
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THERE HAS TO BE SOMETHING WORTH LIVING FOR! TRY & THINK OF SOMETHING GOOD YOU HAVE THAT SOMEONE ELSE WISHES THEY HAD!! MAYBE GOOD HEALTH,
WRITING ABILITY,SELF EXPRESSION!!! IF THERE WAS ABSOLUTELY NOTHING,YOU'D BE GONE BY NOW-SO I KNOW YOU HAVE TO HAVE SOMETHING SPECIAL!!!! MAYBE A GREAT SMILE EVERYBODY ADORES????!
PAINFULL POEM BUT WRITTEN WELL ON HOW YOU FEEL!!!!!!
DAN!!!!!!!
P.S. I GAVE YOU
A 5,I HOPE THAT
MIGHT CONVINCE
YOU TO STAY A LITTLE!!!!!!!! |
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Re: no one to save me
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by Sigma-Phi on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:21:25 PM AEST
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| I know how you must be feeling, I have been there before. Please reach into the depth of your soul to bring out the inner you. There is a light and a path of hope ,lingering waiting for you to find. Life has so many closed doors just waiting to be opened. These doors are the pathways to our eternal happiness. But everyday we have to keep going on the journey that life's given. For some their doors come early and for us we have great adventures. Please keep what strength you have to lead you on these great life's journeys. I lost someone very close to me because they felt this way. I was there too late to give my comforting arms.But for you I am here,listening to your sounds of sorrow, I hope I can captivate your soul and inspire you because LIFE IS WORTH LIVING. |
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Re: no one to save me
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 10:48:27 PM AEST
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Reaching out as you are here in this beautifully written, albeit very sad and heart wrenching write, is a good idea. Other people care, but you need to discover your own inner strength. If you are feeling depressed and overwhelmed, or suicidal, you should consider seeing a therapist. Hopefully, witih some support, you can begin to feel more positive.
God bless, reach out to Him
Will
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Re: no one to save me
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by heartless_soul on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 04:55:58 AM AEST
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| this is truly a very emotional poem and writen with heart, but please dont let these things get you down. I know that this is getting old but you do have so much to live for and things will get better, I know, trust me the knife can bring some releaif but in the end it will only cause more pain, be strong and you wil be able to get through this. just remember that we are all here if you need help. be strong |
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Re: no one to save me
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by Sinned on
Friday, 29th April 2005 @ 06:10:02 AM AEST
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blue-angel
Sadly powerfuly written.Your emotins really cry out.
I can only sugest consuling,being around people,turn to listening and helping others,you have too much to offer this world.Pray God lead you to where he wants you.Yes He does love us and understands.EvenJesus prayed in the garden that "The Father" take away this cup. We all here on YPDC need you words and insight you have much to offer.
May the peace of Christ inter your heart.
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Re: no one to save me
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by Jaycee on
Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 02:08:00 AM AEST
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| Jennie - Within the power I have to help, I will always listen to you and never want you to use the knife. Just ask. Please. |
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