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Array ( [sid] => 92780 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fists of Steel (Left and Right [Two interpritations]) [time] => 2005-04-30 00:19:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => [Left]

Fists of steel
Poised to tip
A broken scale
That's prone to slips

Looks of heat
Meant to sway
From a current course
To their given way

Both broken measures
Seen and dismissed
Dismantled and handed
Back to the kissed

Suck in, puff out
And put on your show
One question lingers
Do you suck or blow?

Everyone with weight
That they try to shift
From their own shoulders
To you, as a "gift"

Great land of judges
All numbed and sedate
Bent on burning others
To deny their own state

[Right]

Fists of steel
Give me your kiss
Shower and pummel me
Into my abyss

I was just kidding
I'm versed in your ways
You hold no new power
I've not found in my days

I know of your legacy
I've seen you in news
Been down those streets
And seen all your shoes

You need definition
To keep my attention
Imaginative discourse
To redefine your convention

I'm sitting here waiting
For some new invention
To crush and to challenge
And propel my ascension [comments] => 0 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 43 [informant] => xnoybis [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Fists of Steel (Left and Right [Two interpritations])

Contributed by xnoybis on Saturday, 30th April 2005 @ 12:19:33 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



[Left]

Fists of steel
Poised to tip
A broken scale
That's prone to slips

Looks of heat
Meant to sway
From a current course
To their given way

Both broken measures
Seen and dismissed
Dismantled and handed
Back to the kissed

Suck in, puff out
And put on your show
One question lingers
Do you suck or blow?

Everyone with weight
That they try to shift
From their own shoulders
To you, as a "gift"

Great land of judges
All numbed and sedate
Bent on burning others
To deny their own state

[Right]

Fists of steel
Give me your kiss
Shower and pummel me
Into my abyss

I was just kidding
I'm versed in your ways
You hold no new power
I've not found in my days

I know of your legacy
I've seen you in news
Been down those streets
And seen all your shoes

You need definition
To keep my attention
Imaginative discourse
To redefine your convention

I'm sitting here waiting
For some new invention
To crush and to challenge
And propel my ascension




Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2005-04-30 00:19:33]
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