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Array ( [sid] => 92921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => thoughtless memories [time] => 2005-05-01 11:41:31 [hometext] => comments please, it also needs a better titel. [bodytext] => Eyes turnning red,
As you find the sum,
Your friends are gone,
And there's no where to run,
Keep fighting till the break of dawn,
Till fist glimps of the sun,
Lives slipping through hands,
No hope to survive,
Just obey the cammands,
And try to take a dive,
Thunder in the hills,
As you run down the street,
Nothing but chills,
About an impossable defeat

Clench your fist and close your eyes
As you see your last glimps of light
Before you get a chance to say your goodbyes
It seems your thoughts have won the fight.

You think it's almost over but you can't be to sure
Nothing is what it seems
And you'll find there's no cure
You're the last one standing
And you've got nothing to lose
You're the last one standing
And it's something you can't choose

Clench your fist and close your eyes
As you see your last glimps of light
Befor you can say all your goodbyes
It seems your dreams have won the fight

It's the never ending war within you mind
As your life falls to peaces
You try to rewind
As your reminded of the scars from your past
It all comes back to you
In one moment in time, the tears start to last

Clench you fist and close your eyes
Make a wish and say goodbye
Your the last one standing
And now your about to lose
Your the last one standing
And that's something you can not choose

Ending the memories
Of the blackened mind
Six feet under
As you become ultimently blind
The time has come
And there's nothing to do
The time has come
And you're finaly are through. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 34 [informant] => punkhead13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
thoughtless memories

Contributed by punkhead13 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 11:41:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Eyes turnning red,
As you find the sum,
Your friends are gone,
And there's no where to run,
Keep fighting till the break of dawn,
Till fist glimps of the sun,
Lives slipping through hands,
No hope to survive,
Just obey the cammands,
And try to take a dive,
Thunder in the hills,
As you run down the street,
Nothing but chills,
About an impossable defeat

Clench your fist and close your eyes
As you see your last glimps of light
Before you get a chance to say your goodbyes
It seems your thoughts have won the fight.

You think it's almost over but you can't be to sure
Nothing is what it seems
And you'll find there's no cure
You're the last one standing
And you've got nothing to lose
You're the last one standing
And it's something you can't choose

Clench your fist and close your eyes
As you see your last glimps of light
Befor you can say all your goodbyes
It seems your dreams have won the fight

It's the never ending war within you mind
As your life falls to peaces
You try to rewind
As your reminded of the scars from your past
It all comes back to you
In one moment in time, the tears start to last

Clench you fist and close your eyes
Make a wish and say goodbye
Your the last one standing
And now your about to lose
Your the last one standing
And that's something you can not choose

Ending the memories
Of the blackened mind
Six feet under
As you become ultimently blind
The time has come
And there's nothing to do
The time has come
And you're finaly are through.




Copyright © punkhead13 ... [ 2005-05-01 11:41:31]
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Re: thoughtless memories (User Rating: 1 )
by Melbelle on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 12:06:23 PM AEST
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i liked it. not bad! i just didnt understand it at the very begining but then after I kept reading it i understood. I thought it was kind of sad at the end. other than that it was okay. =)


Re: thoughtless memories (User Rating: 1 )
by sp3llicup on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 01:03:46 PM AEST
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i really liked this write...keep writing :)

-Michele




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