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Array ( [sid] => 93017 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Poem For You [time] => 2005-05-02 07:53:08 [hometext] => Post Comments Please [bodytext] => As I Lie Down In The Bushes.
You Slowly Walk By.
You Haven't Noticed Me In Weeks.
It Makes Me Want To Die.

It Hurts Me Alot To Think.
You May Love Another One.
But I WIll Wait Quietly.
And see If You Will Come.

My Arms Are Outstretched Widly.
My Heart Open Aswell.
You Walked Away Not Smiling.
And I Was Left To Dwell.

My Love For You Has Not Finished It's Journey.
And Has A Long Way To Go Yet.
I Am Dreading The Day It Will End.
Just Like I Dreaded The Day We Met.
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A Poem For You

Contributed by Red_Spyder_Pixie on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:53:08 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

As I Lie Down In The Bushes.
You Slowly Walk By.
You Haven't Noticed Me In Weeks.
It Makes Me Want To Die.

It Hurts Me Alot To Think.
You May Love Another One.
But I WIll Wait Quietly.
And see If You Will Come.

My Arms Are Outstretched Widly.
My Heart Open Aswell.
You Walked Away Not Smiling.
And I Was Left To Dwell.

My Love For You Has Not Finished It's Journey.
And Has A Long Way To Go Yet.
I Am Dreading The Day It Will End.
Just Like I Dreaded The Day We Met.

Copyright © Red_Spyder_Pixie ... [ 2005-05-02 07:53:08]
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Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by sandysandysandy on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:58:00 AM AEST
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interesting write. enjoyed it very much. I can even picture you as you are in those bushes lol.. get out of them and say hi.. give her something. a note a flower. continue to write like to know what happens...

Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by sandysandysandy on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:58:01 AM AEST
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interesting write. enjoyed it very much. I can even picture you as you are in those bushes lol.. get out of them and say hi.. give her something. a note a flower. continue to write like to know what happens...

Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:56:07 PM AEST
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very original,
I like the thought process behind this write and the ending is clever!

Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Unspoken_Love on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:39:00 PM AEST
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I really like this poem, I have felt something very similar, like you never wanted to start caring but now you never wanna stop.. awesome write.. keep it up!

Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 08:10:40 AM AEST
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A unique style, like every word takes on a special importance. Sad; but powerful write.

Well done,

Will

Re: A Poem For You (User Rating: 1 )
by NDean on Saturday, 9th December 2006 @ 08:50:21 AM AEST
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Really good. Didnt expect it to end that way
COOL
:D

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