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O'le writer of the ages
Contributed by
Archie
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Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:22:33 AM in AEST
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O'le famous poet with thy words
proclaim to us the season
With tales inspiring about life
that grants to us great reason
To overcome the storms of life
and blow the chaff away
Grant joyful songs to lowly hearts
write words to save the day
Pierce pride with words of humbleness
drive apathy from rebels
Give wisdom to the child that asks
grant slaves their resolution
Feed those who hunger for the words
to find their inspiration
Parley the cause of destitiutes
improve some how our nation
And when you have done all these things
through torrent gail and tempest
Give history to mortal man
to let his soul not perish
Bring life and light and liberty
show us the dawning day
When death and pale the circumstance
will one day fade away.
O'le writer of the ages mend
the heart of man that''s broken
Pick him up from the darkened land
free him from all his torment
Help him repent from transgressions
that cause his heart to fail
Bring salutations to his hand
to end the curse of hell.
Copyright ©
Archie
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:50:47 AM AEST
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Great writing with much truth.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 03:46:46 AM AEST
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Archie my lad, this was sensationally writen. I love the writing scheme you used here.
Very poetic. Loves it.
Jane~ |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 05:31:54 AM AEST
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Great write.
You did not ride the "O'le" thing
and try to make it look like something
out of the 1600's.
Good taste.
--Ghosty |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:01:33 AM AEST
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| If there is such a great soul among us I am to bow at his lotus feet..a beautiful poem absolutely delightful and thought provoking:-) venkat |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:19:30 AM AEST
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wow! I am not worthy.
Excellent writing.
Johnny. |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by mina-1 on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:29:48 AM AEST
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Archie this is an outstanding piece of work. You capture what u write about so well. Your writing always has alot of truth behind the lines. Always a pleasure to read ur wonderful work.
Hugs,
~sue~ |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:40:09 AM AEST
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Archie! Just look at you! This is terrific! It gets better and better with each read (there's a lot to absorb here - and on the first read through the mind is turning, turning)... and it absolutely comes alive when spoken aloud. I read it, I confess, as poetry and did not sing it (trust me... that's a good thing... my singing leaves much to be desired. lol!).
Excellent work, Archie ---- keep 'em coming!
Impressed,
~SNM~
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 12:15:27 PM AEST
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another amazing write, well expressed,
pix xx |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by Whisper on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 02:33:18 PM AEST
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Good write.
Whisper |
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Re: O'le writer of the ages
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:02:37 AM AEST
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Mind blowing remarkable write. They keep getting better and better.
A rainbow for you
Love Angelxxxx |
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