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Array ( [sid] => 93122 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => to my friend [time] => 2005-05-03 06:29:41 [hometext] => was play old love songs to ease my pain and this is the result i hope you all enjoy your comments are welcome and in times needed... [bodytext] => I have played the song over and over
just wishing you could hear
but i geuss i never said anything cuz of my fear,
i can't belive it that your gone,
in just one year we made love with passion
and it slipped away with no reason
the song in my heart
makes me cry
to love you with no reason to try,
to need you like i do
makes me blue...
i guess you hurt me honestly
instead of misleading with lies...
but i guess we'll never know
the way things would go
since we said goodbye
i just with you could have said that lie..
just tell me that you loved me
and let things be
but love can't be made in lies
and love can't grow alone.
so know this my dearest friend
that we may not speak
and we may not see one another
but friendship like ours does not end
one day our paths will cross,
i'll walk into your arms
and tell you that i miss my friend
and i'll walk away again
in my heart you will never know
the love that i let grow... [comments] => 5 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 52 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

to my friend

Contributed by brokenwings on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:29:41 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I have played the song over and over
just wishing you could hear
but i geuss i never said anything cuz of my fear,
i can't belive it that your gone,
in just one year we made love with passion
and it slipped away with no reason
the song in my heart
makes me cry
to love you with no reason to try,
to need you like i do
makes me blue...
i guess you hurt me honestly
instead of misleading with lies...
but i guess we'll never know
the way things would go
since we said goodbye
i just with you could have said that lie..
just tell me that you loved me
and let things be
but love can't be made in lies
and love can't grow alone.
so know this my dearest friend
that we may not speak
and we may not see one another
but friendship like ours does not end
one day our paths will cross,
i'll walk into your arms
and tell you that i miss my friend
and i'll walk away again
in my heart you will never know
the love that i let grow...

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-05-03 06:29:41]
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Re: to my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Nos_Bunny on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:44:26 AM AEST
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very very sad, but very beautiful, I liked that poem.

Re: to my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:18:54 AM AEST
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Awww...
This is so beautiful, so touching...
So very deep and telling.

A fine piece, awesome work here!

~kt

Re: to my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 07:21:38 AM AEST
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Losing love can never lose the pain
When you've loved and lost all in vain
Still there is hope, somehow, someday
The love that you lost will again come your way.

Very good poem.
Keep writing.
Keep loving.

-Butch

Re: to my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 08:20:30 AM AEST
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this is amazng, it just broke my heart
ur potrayed ur painful emotions so well and i can really feel the anguish

a remarkable write

Re: to my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 09:07:45 AM AEST
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A very sad and touching write. You've captured ur emotions really well in this poem. Expressed deeply and well. An outstanding heart touching poem. Well done.
hugs,
~sue~

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