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The one he loves beyond exceeding amounts
Her beautiful eyes light his way
The one in his life, guiding him every day

A misery captured in his eyes blind
When she parted but not the feeling undifined
A taste of what he wants and needs
When she kissed his lips that carefully agreed

A dream causing his life to be blessed
With a curse, the pain and plessure in his hearts crest
A breath creating a life forever thought alone
With a hatred for no life, but his own

He stops himself from killing what he hates
With the thoughts, of what if his love would also discreate
He cries from the love so far away
With his heart, in her hands
. . .
The only reason he stays

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His Heart in Her Hands

Contributed by ForeverAlone on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:13:41 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

He awakes to another day without
The one he loves beyond exceeding amounts
Her beautiful eyes light his way
The one in his life, guiding him every day

A misery captured in his eyes blind
When she parted but not the feeling undifined
A taste of what he wants and needs
When she kissed his lips that carefully agreed

A dream causing his life to be blessed
With a curse, the pain and plessure in his hearts crest
A breath creating a life forever thought alone
With a hatred for no life, but his own

He stops himself from killing what he hates
With the thoughts, of what if his love would also discreate
He cries from the love so far away
With his heart, in her hands
. . .
The only reason he stays

Copyright © ForeverAlone ... [ 2005-05-06 21:13:41]
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Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by heartbroken4ever on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 09:16:58 PM AEST
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I love youuuuuuuuu

love your angel
Amber

Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 10:02:15 PM AEST
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almost made me cry. so that obviously means something...

Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:13:37 AM AEST
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well written. i am very sorry to know that you are going through this. :(

Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Saturday, 7th May 2005 @ 01:16:20 PM AEST
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very emotionally strong write, i' m glad you shared and i look forward to more. Keep it up!!

Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th May 2005 @ 10:20:10 PM AEST
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Wow..Very Beautiful...Wishing you the courage to stay strong....Bless your heart, understanding the depths of true Love....WOW....Keep up the awesome writing...~~~Michelle~~~

Re: His Heart in Her Hands (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 4th October 2005 @ 03:59:31 PM AEST
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Beautiful sentiments Clark...beautiful. It's really good that you can switch up your poetic style to suit the mood. Talent you have indeed!
Love really can make a difference---for better or for worse. Good job expressing that.

Scorp.

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