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No game
Contributed by
somedaylove
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Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:26:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I know its not a game but some will win some will lose The heart is not something to be played with but so many try to play games Yet you won mine But not by playing games yet by being you showing me what true love is how wonderfull it could feel to have love giving back with the same passion it was given It start off with more love than I had ever felt before every day you amaze me even more for our love keeps growing yes it is not a game but life a life that some can only dream of but is proof to me that dreams do and will come true
Somedaylove
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Re: No game
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:47:25 AM AEST (User
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Nice little poem about the honeymoon stage of love...It's always so fantastic! I hope your's lasts.... Scorp. |
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Re: No game
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:53:26 AM AEST (User
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this is sweet, i love the honesty of the thing... don't run across that as much anymore. beautiful write.
~Remy~ |
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Re: No game
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:31:56 PM AEST (User
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Love it...game of love has no rules..Very touching writing.. keep up the great work..
~~~Michelle~~~
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Re: No game
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 06:39:04 PM AEST (User
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I really liked this poem, very... poetic, you might say. One can tell that it's very honest and from the heart. Well written.
Take care and welcome,
David |
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Re: No game
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 01:12:49 AM AEST (User
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Such a beautifull write.
Certainly gives hope to those that don't believe in luv.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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