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Array ( [sid] => 93921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She's my cold wound [time] => 2005-05-10 15:03:24 [hometext] => i hate broken hearts... [bodytext] => a ghost of a lamb
my heart in her hand
keep her warm coat
just keep me afloat

lighthouses flicker
heart does beat quicker
i can't find her there
through hazy fog air

i fly through the storm
before i'm forlorn
i see her on land
i descend in her hand

see.. it's this girl that i know
and...my love just can't show
glass...she shatters to me shards
i'll fold...cause i hold no pairs of cards

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She's my cold wound

Contributed by In_a_While on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:03:24 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

a ghost of a lamb
my heart in her hand
keep her warm coat
just keep me afloat

lighthouses flicker
heart does beat quicker
i can't find her there
through hazy fog air

i fly through the storm
before i'm forlorn
i see her on land
i descend in her hand

see.. it's this girl that i know
and...my love just can't show
glass...she shatters to me shards
i'll fold...cause i hold no pairs of cards

she's my cold wound...

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-05-10 15:03:24]
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Re: She's my cold wound (User Rating: 1 )
by Mangs on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:37:59 PM AEST
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wonderfully written....your style is quite unique...refreshing...

Re: She's my cold wound (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 03:39:10 PM AEST
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Interesting poem
Nice use of rhyming
Good Write

~Dawn

Re: She's my cold wound (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:33:51 AM AEST
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What to say about this write? Its another very unique write that is well written with a strong stroke of your pin. You write the type of poetry I love to read, loss and Dark. You write about these things all to well and sometimes I wonder if everything in your life is okay. Take care my friend and I look forward to more of your writes….Steve

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