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Despite the cruel distance between you and I
I won't let our passion just smoulder then die
For deep down inside me there dwells a great fire
Kindled by true love, not only desire
It scorches me, tortues me, no love without pain
Insatiable furnace driving me insane
Engulfing the darkness, the undying flame
Ensuring my feelings will still stay the same [comments] => 7 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dark_descent [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 25 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Within Me

Contributed by dark_descent on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:35:55 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Despite the cruel distance between you and I
I won't let our passion just smoulder then die
For deep down inside me there dwells a great fire
Kindled by true love, not only desire
It scorches me, tortues me, no love without pain
Insatiable furnace driving me insane
Engulfing the darkness, the undying flame
Ensuring my feelings will still stay the same

Copyright © dark_descent ... [ 2005-05-10 17:35:55]
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Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:44:30 PM AEST
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I Love this Poem...My favorite of all of yours..Because I am going through this right now...Amazing write and something I truly relate to....

*True love knows no bounds, and does not fade with distance*

~Clark

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 05:58:04 PM AEST
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"True love knows no bounds, and does not fade with distance"

F--- you man, just F--- you.

Excellent poem though!

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:27:26 PM AEST
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What a simple, sweet , and so to the point poem! I love this and even can relate...though I can't go into it. Absence really does make the heart grow fonder: if your heart is in it at all! Great write! I enjoyed reading this! Thanks for sharing!
juliette

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 06:45:26 PM AEST
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This was written very well. I really like it alot. I can relate...
(Completely off topic, but your screen name is cool too)
Anyway, relly good poem.

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by white_tiger on Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:56:21 PM AEST
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i really liked tha poem becasue it had such great imagery and though it was really short, the message was so clear.

great work

huggs and keep smiling

white_tiger

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 05:35:03 PM AEST
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I wish you the best. Very well written.
Take care.
David

Re: Within Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 05:53:16 PM AEST
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You spoke very true when you identify true love as more than only desire. A complex thing it is. Well penned, and good luck!

Andrew

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