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Array ( [sid] => 9395 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Wondering,hopeing,Deaming [time] => 2002-12-29 09:00:00 [hometext] => i made this poem and i sent it to some people and they liked it. so i wanted to know what other people think. [bodytext] => Wondering, hopeing,&dreaming

i woke up this morning
wondering what to do
a thought came 2 me
and suddenly i was thinkin of you

wondering if you still love me
as much as i love you
wondering if we'll ever be
hopeing you'll never leave

hopeing you'll stay true
keeping your word
is important 2 me as much as i care 4 you
hopeing you'll keep your word

But i found out you didn't
you broke my trust 2 you
thought i was hopeing you wouldn't
but knowing that,...i said 2 my self at least i stayed true to you

now i'm dreaming you didn't do that
cuz deep down i loved you
but you hurt me bad
hopeing we would of last

Dreaming we'd be together
for a moment i thought it was true
being together
but i found out your little secret an now we're threw

but still deep in my heart
i still love you
knowing we can't be together
doesn't mean i'll forget you
you'll always be in my heart,mind,Dream,and thoughts
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 22 [informant] => PanCake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Wondering,hopeing,Deaming

Contributed by PanCake on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Wondering, hopeing,&dreaming

i woke up this morning
wondering what to do
a thought came 2 me
and suddenly i was thinkin of you

wondering if you still love me
as much as i love you
wondering if we'll ever be
hopeing you'll never leave

hopeing you'll stay true
keeping your word
is important 2 me as much as i care 4 you
hopeing you'll keep your word

But i found out you didn't
you broke my trust 2 you
thought i was hopeing you wouldn't
but knowing that,...i said 2 my self at least i stayed true to you

now i'm dreaming you didn't do that
cuz deep down i loved you
but you hurt me bad
hopeing we would of last

Dreaming we'd be together
for a moment i thought it was true
being together
but i found out your little secret an now we're threw

but still deep in my heart
i still love you
knowing we can't be together
doesn't mean i'll forget you
you'll always be in my heart,mind,Dream,and thoughts




Copyright © PanCake ... [ 2002-12-29 09:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wondering,hopeing,Deaming (User Rating: 1 )
by Valerie_Pearson on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:09:37 AM AEST
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nice write, welcome to our site, thanks for sharing, keep writing,


Re: Wondering,hopeing,Deaming (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:56:35 PM AEST
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Aww this is so beautifully written but so sad to...and it's a shame that people keep secrets like this, that in turn hurt us....i don't really know why people can't just be more honest and open with one another...i think this is sweet and i think you should show it to the person who hurt you....i think it would touch them deeply my friend....welcome to YPDC, it's a pleasure to have you here and i look forward to reading more of your poetry....
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