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Array ( [sid] => 94025 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Wake Me [time] => 2005-05-11 09:51:49 [hometext] => This could be fantasy, also.... [bodytext] => Outside the glass, nature says goodnight
The evening sun smiles it's final gold
Upon the dancing colors of the many blooms
As if in celebration of the Mother's success

Lengthening gray splahes wrap those within
The few stray beams highlight you for my eyes
A silent breath's rise reveals delicate firm
The exhale almost disappointing for it's release

In these long shadows of newborn night
The hollow angry of the day is lost
No longer borne in this boundless longing
Our hearts now thirst for more than we had

Dark embers of sultry form those expectant eyes
Within a face that makes artists sigh
A smile that can be felt as well as seen
This portrait of beauty forever etched in my heart

Take me to your well completely
Let me drink until I am whole
Share with me all that you are, sweetly
Nourish the weakness that is my body, my soul

No, never in the total of my existence
Has a light shone as bright in my world
I fall, hoping this dream is to be forever
As the whole of your love now surrounds me

Coming, for the moment, to each other
Sharing the heat of pure and natural desire
In adoring pleasure, our sole thought now
To worship at the carnal altar that is only us

A fervid glow erupts in our besotted minds
With the gentle touches that explore and press
Tender, soft lips knowing the hidden recesses
The sheen of passion enjoyed, now exposed

Deftly, willingly, joined in loving acceptance
Glazed eyes roam the other's features
While we respond to that inner urgency
In a final gasp, we surrender, aware

Amazed and awed by this languid vision
Lying with this pitious wreckage of life
Wishing ever, if I could choose the where and when
Surely, I would die in your arms, tonight. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 2 [informant] => reprobate [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Don't Wake Me

Contributed by reprobate on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:51:49 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Outside the glass, nature says goodnight
The evening sun smiles it's final gold
Upon the dancing colors of the many blooms
As if in celebration of the Mother's success

Lengthening gray splahes wrap those within
The few stray beams highlight you for my eyes
A silent breath's rise reveals delicate firm
The exhale almost disappointing for it's release

In these long shadows of newborn night
The hollow angry of the day is lost
No longer borne in this boundless longing
Our hearts now thirst for more than we had

Dark embers of sultry form those expectant eyes
Within a face that makes artists sigh
A smile that can be felt as well as seen
This portrait of beauty forever etched in my heart

Take me to your well completely
Let me drink until I am whole
Share with me all that you are, sweetly
Nourish the weakness that is my body, my soul

No, never in the total of my existence
Has a light shone as bright in my world
I fall, hoping this dream is to be forever
As the whole of your love now surrounds me

Coming, for the moment, to each other
Sharing the heat of pure and natural desire
In adoring pleasure, our sole thought now
To worship at the carnal altar that is only us

A fervid glow erupts in our besotted minds
With the gentle touches that explore and press
Tender, soft lips knowing the hidden recesses
The sheen of passion enjoyed, now exposed

Deftly, willingly, joined in loving acceptance
Glazed eyes roam the other's features
While we respond to that inner urgency
In a final gasp, we surrender, aware

Amazed and awed by this languid vision
Lying with this pitious wreckage of life
Wishing ever, if I could choose the where and when
Surely, I would die in your arms, tonight.




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Re: Don't Wake Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 02:35:37 PM AEST
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I hope your dream comes through for you as for all those wishing for love. Keep dreaming, Michael. Miracles do happen.

Peace
Dove


Re: Don't Wake Me (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Tuesday, 14th August 2007 @ 06:58:28 AM AEST
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This was so very beautiful, it friggen made me cry. Doesn't take much these days. You are an awesome writer...a soul toucher.
Peace and hugs,
Laura


Re: Don't Wake Me (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 4th June 2014 @ 12:57:12 AM AEST
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michael, you absolutely blew me away with this
sheer masterpiece, truly beautiful! written in exquisite
style and flowing so sweetly and gently across the page...

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