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The medium is broken
High multidirectional flight
The propeller has dropped
The bulge of lightning
Sends a quick shock
The fisherman tumbles
Rolling along on the dock

Double the dosage
Its effects numbing
Sustained unnatural tolerance
The chemicals dissolving
Blowin’ away
A feverish depression
A drugged delay
So begins the infection

Ears keenly aware
Specs of dust breach
Sensation barriers
Wisdom you can not teach
A love story
No need to ever speak
The tragedy
Climatically peaked

Habitually late
Guests never arrived
Conveniently delayed
One sided compromise
Dominant features
Aged skin-lines hide
The inner creature
Who dwells inside

Progress is compared
Normative populations
Regression impaired
A future uncertain
Chronically feared
Silver gates of heaven
An almighty revered
He has not forgotten
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Climatically Peaked

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:09:11 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Breakfast at night
The medium is broken
High multidirectional flight
The propeller has dropped
The bulge of lightning
Sends a quick shock
The fisherman tumbles
Rolling along on the dock

Double the dosage
Its effects numbing
Sustained unnatural tolerance
The chemicals dissolving
Blowin’ away
A feverish depression
A drugged delay
So begins the infection

Ears keenly aware
Specs of dust breach
Sensation barriers
Wisdom you can not teach
A love story
No need to ever speak
The tragedy
Climatically peaked

Habitually late
Guests never arrived
Conveniently delayed
One sided compromise
Dominant features
Aged skin-lines hide
The inner creature
Who dwells inside

Progress is compared
Normative populations
Regression impaired
A future uncertain
Chronically feared
Silver gates of heaven
An almighty revered
He has not forgotten

Copyright Â© jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-11 20:09:11]
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Re: Climatically Peaked (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:12:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem
So many different things wrapped in one
Great Write

~Dawn

Re: Climatically Peaked (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 08:41:24 PM AEST
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You sure did take me in many different areas here and there, my mind at the moment did not catch where you was taking me, but I think if I was feeling better I would be able to catch what you are writing about. So keep up the good work, and don't stop.
Tammi

Re: Climatically Peaked (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 10:13:09 PM AEST
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This is great. It reminds me of a whirlwind picking up pieces of lives as it skips along finally coming to the end. Not sure if I am reading this right but that is what is seems like to me. Let me know please. This is an interesting piece of work.

Rita

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