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[aid] => mick
[title] => Storms of Life
[time] => 2005-05-12 00:26:52
[hometext] => Written for a friend when she was going through lots of problems.
[bodytext] => Don't let life subdue you
Just don't give in to pain
When everything around you
Is drowned in pitch black rain
As lightning lights the sky
I see you standing there
The world is passing by
Unknowing, unaware
You sink down to your knees
Your head between your hands
When no one ever sees
No one can understand
My hands your shoulders hold
My jacket on your back
I'll turn away the cold
And be the strength you lack
I'll hold you in my arms
Till you can stand alone
And shield you from life's harms
Till you can hold your own
[comments] => 17
[counter] => 689
[topic] => 16
[informant] => wachumiri
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[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
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[score] => 74
[ratings] => 15
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => FriendshipPoetry
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Storms of Life
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:26:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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Don't let life subdue you
Just don't give in to pain
When everything around you
Is drowned in pitch black rain
As lightning lights the sky
I see you standing there
The world is passing by
Unknowing, unaware
You sink down to your knees
Your head between your hands
When no one ever sees
No one can understand
My hands your shoulders hold
My jacket on your back
I'll turn away the cold
And be the strength you lack
I'll hold you in my arms
Till you can stand alone
And shield you from life's harms
Till you can hold your own
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2005-05-12 00:26:52]
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Archie on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:34:27 AM AEST
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| Great poem. You seem to always know how to encourage people. This is an awesome poem. |
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:45:06 AM AEST
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The power of this is, I think, in its ending. It's a gift really... the absence of judgement, but the offer of security... to know that someone will be strong when the intended feels not-so-strong themselves is quite a touching message. Yes... a gift, indeed.
Very nicely done -
~Snemmy~ |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by SPSM on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:22:48 AM AEST
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| Very good poem. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:44:52 AM AEST
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A very comforting write... I am sure it helped your friend....
Jenni |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by EverlastingDawn on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:18:42 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem
I hope your friend gets better
Nice Write
~Dawn |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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| Thank you soo much David, this poem really touched me, it means alot to me. |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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| Thank you soo much David, this poem really touched me, it means alot to me. |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 01:12:37 AM AEST
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this is so beautiful and sweet, i really love the line about her wearing your jacket:) hugs n' love, nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Tanmaya on
Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 12:24:22 AM AEST
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Very sensitive and strong words...
A beautiful expression of friendship this is.
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Gigi_15 on
Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 12:11:28 PM AEST
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| This is a very very nice poem..all I can say is wow..and your friend is very lucky to have you....this is a very amazing poem..im very touched..! |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Spike on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 12:38:28 AM AEST
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Sweet write. What we are most of the time - struggling. What we want to be most of the time - protecting, helping. Sometimes through that aid to others, we calm our own struggles and find an easy strength. A poem that really makes you think as well as feel.
Spike |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by lostwithoutyou on
Friday, 19th August 2005 @ 04:46:43 PM AEST
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| I read it today...message me soon. |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by anitajames on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:43:36 AM AEST
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Wow!
I'll hold you in my arms
Till you can stand alone
And shield you from life's harms
Till you can hold your own
Reminds me of my husband. |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:08:23 PM AEST
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You have the incredible ability to be able to pick yourself up and help others do the same. You're a truly gifted poet whose heart shines beautifully through his work.
You're always so giving and kind even when u are down urself. You are amazing I admire u David.
*hugs* from ur fan,
Sue |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by SerenBach on
Sunday, 2nd December 2007 @ 02:35:32 AM AEST
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wow thats soo good. i love it. its just how i feel. i just need that person to come and rescue me :)
"When no one ever sees
No one can understand"
thats amazingly beautiful.
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Re: Storms of Life
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by brew on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 12:55:45 PM AEST
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Love the title
TO have a friend who is unconditional, is wonderful
What are friends for
If we cant trust those. who can we trust.
Your a good guy with lots of emotion and caring qualites...Rare
Hugs
Brew~ |
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Re: Storms of Life
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 11th November 2010 @ 01:48:32 AM AEST
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Words of a true friend (which are very hard to find, by the way) written in a wonderfully woven poetic verse.
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