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Reach for the Stars
Contributed by
Jaycee
on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:11:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Like ice in the cavern
so cold and so far
my dreams out of reach
like the most distant star
Gravity defines me
only on earth I exist
the wind from the stars
on my cheek lightly kissed
The ground is a tyrant
escape attempts failed
my spirit is wounded
my body impaled
Crimson springs forth
from the hole in my chest
Lower my head from the sky
That way it is best
Granite opens wide
to swallow me whole
the reaper is hungry
to harvest my soul
The stars becken loud
they plead do not fall
do not end this battle
and enter his hall
Drive my claws into soil
dangling over precipice
Hanging on for dear life
hoping for that kiss
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Jaycee
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2005-05-12 18:11:24]
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by glue on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:18:15 PM AEST
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Gravity defines me
only on earth I exist
the wind from the stars
on my cheek lightly kissed
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the hole poem is freaken great, but that part is my favorite, not sure why. WOOP. |
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by MorningGlory on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:35:57 PM AEST
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I can only say wow. This was such a great read, I loved it. I felt and seen everything you offered in each line of this poem.
Amy
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 06:42:11 PM AEST
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Wonderful words my friend.....
Isn't it amazing what inspires our poetry!!!
Thank you..
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 09:10:25 PM AEST
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unspeakable imagery...
last stanza's my fav...
"Drive my claws into soil
dangling over precipice
Hanging on for dear life
hoping for that kiss"
very cool...
Hope ya get that kiss...
I'm pullin for ya...
M.O.H.
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by mylady on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:38:52 AM AEST
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wow... like this part....
AllDrive my claws into soil
dangling over precipice
Hanging on for dear life
hoping for that kiss,
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by blue_angel on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:39:05 AM AEST
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i cant choose a part that i like best in this piece, its all written so well. i like it so much, great write. they just keep getting better!
jennie* |
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Re: Reach for the Stars
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by spazz911 on
Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:25:06 PM AEST
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I REALLY like this poem, the pain, the emotion, beautiful
kc |
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