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Array ( [sid] => 94231 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => you fake [time] => 2005-05-12 22:24:33 [hometext] => for all those stupid *****s out there [bodytext] => Strip you make believe perfection
Stop waiting for never coming salvation
Cause in reality, life just sucks
Stop begging, nobody gives a pity *****.

Your true face is haunted
Your self-conscience is taunted
You see your true self form
But holding your fake that is torn.

Let yourself feel what life feels
let it go, put yourself on your knees
***** your fantasy!
This is reality!

Look at yourself, you're just a fake
It's not you, it's not your fate
What the ***** is with your gangster signs?
Sorry but you look like you're just nine
Look inside through your heart that is bleeding
Reality... that's what you really are needing.

You fake... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 6 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

you fake

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:24:33 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

Strip you make believe perfection
Stop waiting for never coming salvation
Cause in reality, life just sucks
Stop begging, nobody gives a pity *****.

Your true face is haunted
Your self-conscience is taunted
You see your true self form
But holding your fake that is torn.

Let yourself feel what life feels
let it go, put yourself on your knees
***** your fantasy!
This is reality!

Look at yourself, you're just a fake
It's not you, it's not your fate
What the ***** is with your gangster signs?
Sorry but you look like you're just nine
Look inside through your heart that is bleeding
Reality... that's what you really are needing.

You fake...

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2005-05-12 22:24:33]
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Re: you fake (User Rating: 1 )
by emokid on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 10:33:13 PM AEST
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I know what your talking about and I hate it as much as you. WHat really gets me is that they'll talk about killing someone and then say praise god but this is a really good poem.

Re: you fake (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:05:15 PM AEST
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Yes i know where you are coming from..
there is alot of them out there.. Great poem.

I liked it.

Re: you fake (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:15:54 PM AEST
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ha ha
the fake gangsters are quite annoying
black and white
foolish
yet in some ways very funny
in a sad way.
Good one......

Re: you fake (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 12:25:15 AM AEST
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"What the ***** is with your gangster signs?
Sorry but you look like you're just nine "

AHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

Ah, damn. That's some good *****.

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