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With unknown force
Sending me messages
I'd rather not recieve

Lying awake, at night
Thoughts emptying to ends
Ideas endlessly flowing
To where blood will not

Too young to die
We all wear Death
Like a smoking jacket
Smoking at the seams

Hints and suggestions
Bubble from below
We can all smile happy
Sitting on the same sharp wire

Little things pop
Like balloons not grasped
Floating to the sky
The carnival is cheap

Guess my weight
And pound the hammer
I could spin it off
But the tickets are short

Cotton Candy
Fluff for the taste
Big and distracting
The real value is free
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The Carnival

Contributed by xnoybis on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:14:06 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

My limbs tingle
With unknown force
Sending me messages
I'd rather not recieve

Lying awake, at night
Thoughts emptying to ends
Ideas endlessly flowing
To where blood will not

Too young to die
We all wear Death
Like a smoking jacket
Smoking at the seams

Hints and suggestions
Bubble from below
We can all smile happy
Sitting on the same sharp wire

Little things pop
Like balloons not grasped
Floating to the sky
The carnival is cheap

Guess my weight
And pound the hammer
I could spin it off
But the tickets are short

Cotton Candy
Fluff for the taste
Big and distracting
The real value is free

Copyright © xnoybis ... [ 2005-05-15 04:14:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Carnival (User Rating: 1 )
by Absent on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 04:35:53 AM AEST
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Very thought provoking. It seems very dark. I like it alot.

Re: The Carnival (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Sunday, 15th May 2005 @ 07:25:33 AM AEST
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Wow. This is interesting, too.
I have no idea what this is about, and like the other person said, this is a very thought provoking write.
I love the images in this.

Great write,
*hugs* Phil xxx

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