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Array ( [sid] => 94653 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2005-05-16 21:07:57 [hometext] => I wrote this poem after I got out of the mental hospital when I tried to kill myself! [bodytext] => People often think there's only one way out,
So many things on their minds they need to think about.
Why to live?
Why to die?
Should they?
Should they cry?
How to do it?
Where and when?
Night or morning?
Nine or ten?
Slowly and painfully with a slit,
Slash to the heart nice and quick.
Jump a cliff, over does,Drown themselves,
What hurts the most?
Who will it affect?
Who will care?
What's iit like with the man up there?
Should they cause so much pain to those who you love them?
They'd go insane.
So many reasons not to stick around,
To be 6ft under beneath the ground.
Of course there's still reason to be here,
It may not seem so but someone is there.
Friends and family,
Teachers at school.
Talk to someone don't be a fool.
Suicide's one way out,
There are many ways they should all be checked out for better days.
Their life can change in a few small steps,
They could stay alive or end up dead,
Giving into the voices in their head!
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Contributed by Deep_Within_My_Heart on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:07:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

People often think there's only one way out,
So many things on their minds they need to think about.
Why to live?
Why to die?
Should they?
Should they cry?
How to do it?
Where and when?
Night or morning?
Nine or ten?
Slowly and painfully with a slit,
Slash to the heart nice and quick.
Jump a cliff, over does,Drown themselves,
What hurts the most?
Who will it affect?
Who will care?
What's iit like with the man up there?
Should they cause so much pain to those who you love them?
They'd go insane.
So many reasons not to stick around,
To be 6ft under beneath the ground.
Of course there's still reason to be here,
It may not seem so but someone is there.
Friends and family,
Teachers at school.
Talk to someone don't be a fool.
Suicide's one way out,
There are many ways they should all be checked out for better days.
Their life can change in a few small steps,
They could stay alive or end up dead,
Giving into the voices in their head!

Copyright © Deep_Within_My_Heart ... [ 2005-05-16 21:07:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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