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Inner Contempt
Contributed by
Loche
on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:01:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Waking..
to lifes everyday repetitious
cycle of relentlessness
It all starts from here
heart begins to throb
chest tightens
breathing becomes a struggle
my mind wonders aimlessly
my stomache feels upset
not able to eat
or keep anything down
My entire body constanly vibrates
I feel as if my mental
and my physical state
could collapse at any given time
I keep myself from 'others' company
for I' m so frail
my hyper ventalating causes me to..
almost faint.
in the hospital with
IV'S inside of me
along with tubes and stickers
attached to monitors
I have lost much weight in a short span
my emotions have taken over my mind and body
no matter what I try..
nothing ever helps
I've finally hit rock bottom
just as I'm about to accept death as the only way out..
Copyright ©
Loche
... [
2005-05-16 22:01:27]
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Re: Inner Contempt
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:15:19 PM AEST
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| Felt some of this before. The emotion is well done, as the poem is. I love your last two lines, but then, they're extremely realtable to. Though I have to say, some of the best poetry is that from our emotions. Very Nice job. |
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