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[aid] => mick
[title] => SHARING
[time] => 2005-05-17 02:29:48
[hometext] => A poor little old couple walk into McDonald's and everyone feels so sorry for them, and you will too
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SHARING
Into McDonalds walked a little old couple
'Tis a very cold winter night, they walked slow.
They looked "out of place" amongst the younger jungle.
All eyes were watching them, with love's outflow....
You could tell what everyone was thinking.
"They've loved each for more than 50 years...."
Such devotion, such loving, such sharing
Married all those many years, aged, through many tears
The little old man hesitated, and stood at the counter
He then ordered fries, and just one hamburger.
Everyone noticed that he only ordered one and not two.
They slowly sat down, placing the tray on their table
for all to view.
Seated up against the back wall table,
He began to divide the French fries evenly
as he was able.
He then took the wrapper from the hamburger
and cut it in two.
Just one drink also, she was drinking while
this little ritual he went through.
A young couple sitting near them could see
They probably couldn't afford to buy items,
more than three.
The young man simply couldn't stand the agony.
He approached them politely and offered to buy them
another meal for free!
They both thought that was so kind, but
refused his offer,
The little old lady said, "We always share."
The little old man continued eating and
enjoying the hamburger's flavor.
Another young man approached, and said,
"Please let us help you, we really care!"
The old man then insisted, "We're just fine,
you I'm thanking"
To the little old lady he said, "You're just sitting
there, why aren't you eating?"
She said, "Because we are still sharing?
The younger man said, but you're not eating
what are you sharing?
She answered.........
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`"The Teeth"
"This was sent to me
from a dear friend."
The poem is mine"
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 16, 2005
"Too often we underestimate the
power of a touch, a smile, a kind word,
a listening ear, an honest compliment,
or the smallest act of caring, all of which
have the potential to turn a life around."
~Leo Buscaglia~
"Sharing, caring smiles!"
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SHARING
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:29:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
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SHARING
Into McDonalds walked a little old couple
'Tis a very cold winter night, they walked slow.
They looked "out of place" amongst the younger jungle.
All eyes were watching them, with love's outflow....
You could tell what everyone was thinking.
"They've loved each for more than 50 years...."
Such devotion, such loving, such sharing
Married all those many years, aged, through many tears
The little old man hesitated, and stood at the counter
He then ordered fries, and just one hamburger.
Everyone noticed that he only ordered one and not two.
They slowly sat down, placing the tray on their table
for all to view.
Seated up against the back wall table,
He began to divide the French fries evenly
as he was able.
He then took the wrapper from the hamburger
and cut it in two.
Just one drink also, she was drinking while
this little ritual he went through.
A young couple sitting near them could see
They probably couldn't afford to buy items,
more than three.
The young man simply couldn't stand the agony.
He approached them politely and offered to buy them
another meal for free!
They both thought that was so kind, but
refused his offer,
The little old lady said, "We always share."
The little old man continued eating and
enjoying the hamburger's flavor.
Another young man approached, and said,
"Please let us help you, we really care!"
The old man then insisted, "We're just fine,
you I'm thanking"
To the little old lady he said, "You're just sitting
there, why aren't you eating?"
She said, "Because we are still sharing?
The younger man said, but you're not eating
what are you sharing?
She answered.........
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`"The Teeth"
"This was sent to me
from a dear friend."
The poem is mine"
Created by
Lovingcritters
ConSue
May 16, 2005
"Too often we underestimate the
power of a touch, a smile, a kind word,
a listening ear, an honest compliment,
or the smallest act of caring, all of which
have the potential to turn a life around."
~Leo Buscaglia~
"Sharing, caring smiles!"
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Lovingcritters
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Re: SHARING
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 02:47:39 AM AEST
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Omg...Its just so good...two thumbs up...
Yeah the story's funny...lol. |
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Re: SHARING
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 04:07:06 AM AEST
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Lovingcritters
This poem is neat
I mean sweet
Sinned
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Re: SHARING
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 05:16:27 AM AEST
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Two little golden hearts..its a beautifully touching story..God bless you..hugs my
dear friend..:-)venkat |
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Re: SHARING
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 06:55:55 AM AEST
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Delightfully humerous ConSue, words and pictures - just incredibly comical.
But Leo Buscaglia's quote is remarkably serious and so very true. Save it!
"Too often we underestimate the
power of a touch, a smile, a kind word,
a listening ear, an honest compliment,
or the smallest act of caring, all of which
have the potential to turn a life around."
~Leo Buscaglia~
Blessings
Thanks ConSue
Love and peace
Elizabeth
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Re: SHARING
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:53:52 AM AEST
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| very sad story but good:) |
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Re: SHARING
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:21:05 AM AEST
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Con Sue you have written such a wonderful piece, i love the tendernes of this poem.
Great writing as always.
Jane xxx |
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Re: SHARING
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:21:42 AM AEST
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Con Sue you have written such a wonderful piece, i love the tendernes of this poem.
Great writing as always.
Jane xxx |
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Re: SHARING
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 11:24:12 AM AEST
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Haha---that's so sweet---true love for sure!
It is a little sad, but loving in a way too.
Scorp. |
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Re: SHARING
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 01:00:25 PM AEST
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Absolutely delightful piece. Not sure I could share teeth, but suppose if that is all you have you do what you can to survive. It shows the true love of the two people and willingness to share in all. Thank you, Connie, for sharing this.
Much warm love,
Rita |
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Re: SHARING
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:15:50 AM AEST
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| Apart from the teeth this could be the wife and I. McDonalds is not our type of food too so perhaps we are just the loving couple that shares everything. Great poem Great Pictures The wife and I we just loved it hugs from bernard. |
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Re: SHARING
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:34:08 AM AEST
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Once again your writes amaze me.
so refreshing.awsome |
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Re: SHARING
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 04:24:17 AM AEST
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A masterpeice, mom.
huggs,
yo brat,
emy |
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Re: SHARING
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by candyistoo-sweet on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:24:07 PM AEST
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| its too cute!!!! |
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