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baby i love you
Contributed by
sp3llicup
on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:18:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
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baby, lay down with me at night
hold me with your strong arms o so tight
hold my body close to yours, but keep our eyes in sight
keep me warm through the night
baby, whisper softly into my ear
tell me your secrets and what you fear
if you share yours, ill share mine
we can talk all night, and not care about the time
baby, if you tell me you love me
and youll feel my body heat go up in degrees
if you tell me you dont know
youll feel my body as cold as snow
baby, tell me your never going to leave me
tell me that we are meant to be
until we die
together forever and never have to wonder why
baby, youve helped me through everything there is
all my pain and all my hatred
you take it all in, even if im taking it out on you
you dont care, as long im true
baby, i cant express my love for you
youve been there for me anyimtime i need you
i would never be able to repay
but i know your going to need me one day
baby i love you
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Re: baby i love you
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:30:42 PM AEST
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sounds like you have a love so true through good and the bad nicely expressed and written
Michelle |
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Re: baby i love you
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by Doriens_Picture on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:45:35 PM AEST
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wow this is such a nice write its perfect
im sure that he will tell you all you want to hear
i dont know a guy that would say they dont know |
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Re: baby i love you
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by Kevin on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:13:52 PM AEST
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That was really sweet, truly from the heart, and it expresses ur emotions and feelings magnificanty :-)....keep up the great work
-Kevin |
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Re: baby i love you
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 10:23:24 PM AEST
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| amazing write, feelings expressed perfectly. words are sometimes hard to find, and you did an awesome job expressing them. |
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