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[aid] => Mick
[title] => °°°Rosa°°°
[time] => 2002-12-30 23:20:00
[hometext] => Even tho i know she will never see this poem as she is an elder lady...i write this to her a wonderful lady who saved someone i deeply loved from death....This woman was a very important part of my life...and as my friend i love her dearly....
[bodytext] => Aged angel woman, wrinkled little hands
It's hearts like yours that make life grand
So close to death, so full of life
Your were so profound, in both of our lives
You saved an Angel Man with your wings
You looked in his eyes, and his heart you seen
You gave him love, as him you saved
It's hearts like yours, that are so brave
Wing's black as the night, yet bright as the day
You made him live, so many more days
I'm grateful to you, and i'd give you my life
As one day he almost made me his wife
Thank you Rosa for all that you do
You truly are amazing, and i truly love you
You will always hold a key deep within my heart
Even though i know we are far apart
You had to move, you had to go
But this i feel has helped him grow
My sweet dear Rosa just know this
You hold heaven's sweet true kiss...
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[ratings] => 5
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°°°Rosa°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
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Aged angel woman, wrinkled little hands
It's hearts like yours that make life grand
So close to death, so full of life
Your were so profound, in both of our lives
You saved an Angel Man with your wings
You looked in his eyes, and his heart you seen
You gave him love, as him you saved
It's hearts like yours, that are so brave
Wing's black as the night, yet bright as the day
You made him live, so many more days
I'm grateful to you, and i'd give you my life
As one day he almost made me his wife
Thank you Rosa for all that you do
You truly are amazing, and i truly love you
You will always hold a key deep within my heart
Even though i know we are far apart
You had to move, you had to go
But this i feel has helped him grow
My sweet dear Rosa just know this
You hold heaven's sweet true kiss...
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-12-30 23:20:00]
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by emystar on
Monday, 30th December 2002 @ 11:26:27 PM AEST
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Very fine tribute!
Very well written.
We need more of these little old ladies on this planet.
Great write!
PEACE, LUV, JOY,
emy |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:00:57 AM AEST
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Oreo,this was such a beautiful tribute to her I'm sure she would have just loved it!
Bless people like that in the world,just like my father who kept my mom living more years than we thought! Great peice! Christina |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by Panther_1978 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:05:44 AM AEST
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awww... This is so sweet! She is a very special person to have you as a friend!!! Great write...
Panther |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 12:25:03 AM AEST
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I dont know who she is or was, but you made me feel as though she is an angel sent from heaven. Well done as always my friend.
( And btw,,,I changed my mind. :o) You know what I mean. ;o) Larry ) |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by Mystery_Girl on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 01:44:04 AM AEST
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| Rosa sounds like a very lovely remarkable lady....and what a nice tribute u have written....take care.....Tanya.........:-) |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by InexactExactness on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 04:49:34 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you did this poem for her and even though you say she won't see it elderly women have that strange intuition to know what's going on. So I'm sure that she knows how much you love her. I loved this.
Thank You,
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:54:39 PM AEST
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| Oreo, what a great uplift, a wonderful write, have a great new year |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 05:59:53 PM AEST
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| absolutely fabulous write...isn't funny how God uses everyday people as his special angels. this women i am sure will have a special place in heaven thank you for sharing with us about her |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 08:47:20 PM AEST
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| This is such a beautifully written tribute to your friend. There are some people who have hearts of gold ... it's a shame she can't read it. Lovely poetry Oreo. |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by nomad on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 09:28:16 AM AEST
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| What a beautiful tribute, OreO. Someday, perhaps, she will get to read this. |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:09:59 PM AEST
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HI OREO,
THIS IS AN AWESOME WRITE,I JUST LOVE THIS ,YOU SURE HAVE AWAY WITH WORDS.
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by fancyface4898 on
Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:35:27 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write. I am so glad I decided to read more of your writings. |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by venkat on
Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 04:54:26 AM AEST
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| Looked in his eyes, and his heart you seen-very beautiful line. you will always hold a key deep within my heart--a good poetry.Thank you for sharing your so nice feelings...Venkat. |
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Re: °°°Rosa°°°
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by wordsy on
Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:24:49 AM AEST
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Words well woven.
wordsy. |
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