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Array ( [sid] => 94852 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LIPS [time] => 2005-05-18 09:24:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Mixed emotions on the topic
When the time is right
You will let loose
And be yourself for tonight
The moment has come
This is your last chance
To become undone

From within yourself
A voice can be heard
From the bottom of the pit
A figure can be discerned
On the roof top where you sit
The stars a visible
And where you exhale
Your lips become irresistible

The temperature begins to drop
A sign from the stars
That you’re gazing must stop
Its amazing you lasted this long
In pretending that it was you
Who wrote this love song
Where you sit and sing
The electric violin
The cord abruptly snaps
And your gazing eyes
Have their final relapse

Content and satiated
You have been pleasured
In your bed of feathers
You lay waiting
Unfettered
Unassuming
Just sitting there
Still humming the chorus
The song you never wrote
Lips ever so gorgeous
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LIPS

Contributed by jyssvw on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:24:12 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Mixed emotions on the topic
When the time is right
You will let loose
And be yourself for tonight
The moment has come
This is your last chance
To become undone

From within yourself
A voice can be heard
From the bottom of the pit
A figure can be discerned
On the roof top where you sit
The stars a visible
And where you exhale
Your lips become irresistible

The temperature begins to drop
A sign from the stars
That you’re gazing must stop
Its amazing you lasted this long
In pretending that it was you
Who wrote this love song
Where you sit and sing
The electric violin
The cord abruptly snaps
And your gazing eyes
Have their final relapse

Content and satiated
You have been pleasured
In your bed of feathers
You lay waiting
Unfettered
Unassuming
Just sitting there
Still humming the chorus
The song you never wrote
Lips ever so gorgeous

Copyright Â© jyssvw ... [ 2005-05-18 09:24:12]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LIPS (User Rating: 1 )
by alexb on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:40:24 AM AEST
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you have a great gift for writing. this one was amazing. keep up the great writes!

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