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Array ( [sid] => 94996 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Suicide [time] => 2005-05-19 13:20:25 [hometext] => this is kinda freestyle at the top of my head...it the first poem ive written in a long time.... it sorta doesnt rym but thats okay! it isnt the best i know it isnt.... [bodytext] => As i walked down the hall
I felt the blade in my pocket
I wanted my death to make a bang
Something everyone would remember
So all the students would know
that what they did and said
did make me sick in the head

just sit on the flood
next to the toliet
lift up the sleeves
reveal my scars, my past, my fears

start from the top
Go straight down
make it deep and dont make a sound
it all gushes out all at once

as i feel the tingle and i start to run dry
i knew that this was the perfect suicide
Everyone would see, everyone would know
That this isnt just for a show

So my suicide did make a bang
as my blood dripped out
while everyone said my name. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 249 [topic] => 36 [informant] => bloodytears5 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

My Suicide

Contributed by bloodytears5 on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 01:20:25 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As i walked down the hall
I felt the blade in my pocket
I wanted my death to make a bang
Something everyone would remember
So all the students would know
that what they did and said
did make me sick in the head

just sit on the flood
next to the toliet
lift up the sleeves
reveal my scars, my past, my fears

start from the top
Go straight down
make it deep and dont make a sound
it all gushes out all at once

as i feel the tingle and i start to run dry
i knew that this was the perfect suicide
Everyone would see, everyone would know
That this isnt just for a show

So my suicide did make a bang
as my blood dripped out
while everyone said my name.

Copyright © bloodytears5 ... [ 2005-05-19 13:20:25]
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Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Lucinda on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 02:41:23 PM AEST
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Wow! A truly amazing poem and it has a huge impact! It reminds me alot of the song called 'Nothing to lose' by Billy Talent! It really made me think about things for a while! I love it u should deffo write poems more often!

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by Anu on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 03:35:24 PM AEST
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Hey dat was gud....but never do dat...we need gud poets like u.. ;) keep it up buddy!!

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 11:50:02 AM AEST
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amazing poem. I loved it mostly cuz i am also sick in the head and anything with blood, killing and death gets my attetion and full respect. great poem.

christina

Re: My Suicide (User Rating: 1 )
by crazygirl on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:04:20 PM AEST
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this is just wow! it makes my heart skip beats when i read it. its got alot of feeling in it, but just the right about. its really dramatic, and i just totally love it. definately one of my faves

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