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Path To Our Fate
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:16:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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One letter at a time the world transforms alive
From empty sheets of paper,
My life dances before your eyes
As if its something greater
Beyond the extension of your belief when really its the words that do the work for me,
Sunny days to starry nights you think my life of something more than meaningless,
You see the human in me and you realize the human in you
Break me into two and this is what you get,
The feelings that combat each other until one of them fails to win
And my perception of the winner is grounded unto these words
Left open for you to relate
For your soul to feel,
My tears drown in these words
And my love collides with them, only to create something so unreal
That minds of simple depths cannot interpret
And you begin to see again with new eyes,
Begin to feel again with new taste
All because of words.
That is why words our the path to our fate.
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xxbreathlessx
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2005-05-19 16:16:48]
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Re: Path To Our Fate
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by waos on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 07:43:56 PM AEST
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That was quite good, I enjoyed it. You had some interesting images
and thoughts/ideas. I enjoyed this quite a bit. Nice job.
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