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Array ( [sid] => 95059 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Immortality Does Not Exist [time] => 2005-05-19 20:32:00 [hometext] => kinda weird i dont know... plz read and tell me what you think... thanx......... ~jennie* [bodytext] => Singing
Spirit; take me up in arms with you
Giving
Soul; free me, show me the way through
Living
Heart; carry me into eternity
Bringing
Feeling; take me to the perpetuity

Breathing
Life; save me, let me live
Beating
Truth; oh this soul let it give
Meaning
Hope; from happiness missed
Sheathing
Trust; immortality does not exist

Here on earth
We are bound to our blatant horizons
But with rebirth
We are the place we rest our eyes in
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 19 [informant] => blue_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

Immortality Does Not Exist

Contributed by blue_angel on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:32:00 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

Singing
Spirit; take me up in arms with you
Giving
Soul; free me, show me the way through
Living
Heart; carry me into eternity
Bringing
Feeling; take me to the perpetuity

Breathing
Life; save me, let me live
Beating
Truth; oh this soul let it give
Meaning
Hope; from happiness missed
Sheathing
Trust; immortality does not exist

Here on earth
We are bound to our blatant horizons
But with rebirth
We are the place we rest our eyes in

Copyright © blue_angel ... [ 2005-05-19 20:32:00]
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Re: Immortality Does Not Exist (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:38:27 PM AEST
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Another thought provoking poem from that fertile mind of yours. The poem seems to embrace a resurrection theme where life is finite, painful and release from that life is the goal, the reward, the happiness. A very good write and interesting style with the one word prefixes in the first 2 stanzas. Nice job.

Re: Immortality Does Not Exist (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 08:56:37 PM AEST
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songlike quality....i like its rythm

Re: Immortality Does Not Exist (User Rating: 1 )
by GingerB on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 10:32:01 PM AEST
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'Food For Thought'
Good write.

Ginny

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