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Array ( [sid] => 95127 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I FEEL [time] => 2005-05-20 13:19:47 [hometext] => I WROTE THIS FROM WATCHING ONE OF MY CLOSE FRIENDS GETTING HURT. [bodytext] =>
I KNOW WE’VE HAD DIFFICULTIES IN THE PAST.
THERE WERE TIMES WE THOUGHT WE’D NEVER LAST.
A LOVE I ONCE THOUGHT WAS TRUE.
GOT MESSED UP WITHOUT A CLUE.
SOMETHING DIDN’T GO RIGHT SOMEWHERE DOWN THE LINE.
WHATEVER IT WAS HAD ME LIVING A LIE.
I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU OUT STRAIGHT.
THAT WHAT YOU DID WAS NOT OKAY.
MY LOVE WAS SO STRONG I COULDN’T LET GO.
HOW I FEEL INSIDE I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW.
I FEEL YOU THINK OF HER WHEN I’M IN YOUR ARMS.
I GET REAL TENSE I WONDER WHERE YOU ARE.
I FEEL YOU THINK OF HER WHEN YOU HEAR A LOVE SONG.
I JUST HANG REAL TIGHT AND TRY TO BE STRONG.
I FEEL AS IF YOU WILL RUN TO HER.
I TRY NOT TO GET CLOSE TO YOU JUST TO BE SURE.
I FEEL AS IF THE WALLS ARE SLOWLY CLOSING IN.
AND IN MY MIND IT PLAYS AGAIN AND AGAIN.
I LOVED YOU SO MUCH IT GETS TO ME.
THAT I CAN THINK AND FEEL THESE AWFUL THINGS.
I FEEL LIKE THESES LESSONS YOU HAVE LEARNED.
SHOULD MAKE ME STOP FEELING SO CONCERNED.
I WANT US TO START OVER ON A CLEAN SLATE.
IT’S WORTH A TRY IT’S NEVER TO LATE.
IF IT’S MENT TO BE THEN IT WILL.
IF IT’S NOT IT WON’T I’LL LOVE YOU STILL.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 32 [informant] => kylie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
I FEEL

Contributed by kylie on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:19:47 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry




I KNOW WE’VE HAD DIFFICULTIES IN THE PAST.
THERE WERE TIMES WE THOUGHT WE’D NEVER LAST.
A LOVE I ONCE THOUGHT WAS TRUE.
GOT MESSED UP WITHOUT A CLUE.
SOMETHING DIDN’T GO RIGHT SOMEWHERE DOWN THE LINE.
WHATEVER IT WAS HAD ME LIVING A LIE.
I JUST WANT TO TELL YOU OUT STRAIGHT.
THAT WHAT YOU DID WAS NOT OKAY.
MY LOVE WAS SO STRONG I COULDN’T LET GO.
HOW I FEEL INSIDE I THINK YOU SHOULD KNOW.
I FEEL YOU THINK OF HER WHEN I’M IN YOUR ARMS.
I GET REAL TENSE I WONDER WHERE YOU ARE.
I FEEL YOU THINK OF HER WHEN YOU HEAR A LOVE SONG.
I JUST HANG REAL TIGHT AND TRY TO BE STRONG.
I FEEL AS IF YOU WILL RUN TO HER.
I TRY NOT TO GET CLOSE TO YOU JUST TO BE SURE.
I FEEL AS IF THE WALLS ARE SLOWLY CLOSING IN.
AND IN MY MIND IT PLAYS AGAIN AND AGAIN.
I LOVED YOU SO MUCH IT GETS TO ME.
THAT I CAN THINK AND FEEL THESE AWFUL THINGS.
I FEEL LIKE THESES LESSONS YOU HAVE LEARNED.
SHOULD MAKE ME STOP FEELING SO CONCERNED.
I WANT US TO START OVER ON A CLEAN SLATE.
IT’S WORTH A TRY IT’S NEVER TO LATE.
IF IT’S MENT TO BE THEN IT WILL.
IF IT’S NOT IT WON’T I’LL LOVE YOU STILL.




Copyright © kylie ... [ 2005-05-20 13:19:47]
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Re: I FEEL (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 03:11:31 PM AEST
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This was written in a way that I think many of us can relate to. I've certainly been there! This was well-worded...One question? Why the CAPS?? lol Scorp.


Re: I FEEL (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Monday, 17th April 2006 @ 01:46:59 PM AEST
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Certainly hope things has gotten better for You by now..
This write was very good and sad..
God Bless!




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