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the world will fall from life and lies
into the midnight sun

Unbrideled mirth
memories of secrets and sublime reign
sent to Hell in a burst
of sulphur and cloven myth

The moon will rise through Eden and ((shake))
freezing waters no frost could harden
Wisemen will melt and die in the wake of new garden Gods
who would weave a new evil
on a southern tree,
boiling the depths of plasmic seas

Heaven's Hill torn away in a frenzied lust
of sin and deprivation
while the new Gods stroll the way
forked tounge on the fruit

Speaking serpents now the central plane
as their silhouettes burn against the crimson sky
in the shaping of time [comments] => 7 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Man_On_High [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

heres some darkness for ya...

Contributed by Man_On_High on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In the shaping of time
the world will fall from life and lies
into the midnight sun

Unbrideled mirth
memories of secrets and sublime reign
sent to Hell in a burst
of sulphur and cloven myth

The moon will rise through Eden and ((shake))
freezing waters no frost could harden
Wisemen will melt and die in the wake of new garden Gods
who would weave a new evil
on a southern tree,
boiling the depths of plasmic seas

Heaven's Hill torn away in a frenzied lust
of sin and deprivation
while the new Gods stroll the way
forked tounge on the fruit

Speaking serpents now the central plane
as their silhouettes burn against the crimson sky
in the shaping of time

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2005-05-21 20:19:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 08:57:27 PM AEST
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this is a good poem. i like it. especially the second and last stanzas. they have a lot of meaning to me. keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by TheVoice on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:11:41 PM AEST
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You are right, it is dark.

Great piece.

The Voice

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 09:30:18 PM AEST
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In the shaping of time
the world will fall from life and lies
into the midnight sun

pretty good...i like what you wrote it about and all...

Auryn

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 10:25:14 PM AEST
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very dark almost skerrrd me nicely written once again you have a flare with the pen
Michelle

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:17:05 PM AEST
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This is an excellent piece of work, Billy, but I don't believe the universe would allow this to exist. We have terror and sadness in our world now, but we also have peace and beauty and love that runs parallel alongside it. There may always be evil but there will always be good also.

Peace,
Rita

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:40:55 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this not only a taste of things 2 come but what may be happening right now under our noses . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: heres some darkness for ya... (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 12:43:51 AM AEST
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Billy a thought provoking piece of poetry written with immense darkness. You never cease to amaze me with ur remarkable ability to produce such flawless writes. I loved it. well done.
*hug*
~sue~

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