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Array ( [sid] => 95318 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let her go [time] => 2005-05-22 02:23:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I keep waiting for the other shoe to fall
for you to say its over
for me to once again lose it all
You tell me it will be alright
that somehow things will work out
so please lets not fight
But how do I know your not lying
filling my head with stories
and that I wont be left crying
You say my issue is trusting you
we cant have anything
if I cant believe what you say is true
Thats not it you see
in order for this to work
you have to let her be
What you two had has disappeared
its about us now
the day has come that you've feared
You must make the choice
you cant have both
Im sorry my feelings I have to voice
I know this isnt easy for you to do
believe me
I had to do it too
I'll be here for you as much as I can
but we're in deep now
and you have to stand up and be a man
I'm dealing with it the best way I know how
but I cant wait forever
this is something you must do now
Its a matter of what your willing to lose
misery or love
its up to you to choose!



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Let her go

Contributed by cutes252 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 02:23:09 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



I keep waiting for the other shoe to fall
for you to say its over
for me to once again lose it all
You tell me it will be alright
that somehow things will work out
so please lets not fight
But how do I know your not lying
filling my head with stories
and that I wont be left crying
You say my issue is trusting you
we cant have anything
if I cant believe what you say is true
Thats not it you see
in order for this to work
you have to let her be
What you two had has disappeared
its about us now
the day has come that you've feared
You must make the choice
you cant have both
Im sorry my feelings I have to voice
I know this isnt easy for you to do
believe me
I had to do it too
I'll be here for you as much as I can
but we're in deep now
and you have to stand up and be a man
I'm dealing with it the best way I know how
but I cant wait forever
this is something you must do now
Its a matter of what your willing to lose
misery or love
its up to you to choose!







Copyright © cutes252 ... [ 2005-05-22 02:23:09]
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Re: Let her go (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:33:54 PM AEST
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Cutes252

To me this is a sad write.Don't let a any guy string you along.
No girl/woman needs a man.
if you don't have trust you don't have love.

Sinned


Re: Let her go (User Rating: 1 )
by cutes252 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:16:52 AM AEST
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thnx for the advice sinned...he made his decision and it was me.....


Re: Let her go (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 02:45:34 PM AEST
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I guess love is letting go of the past, the future, and even the present. But especially the past. Well written.
Take care.
David


Re: Let her go (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:55:12 AM AEST
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nice write. sad too.




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