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Array ( [sid] => 95377 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Saint Joseph Mercy [time] => 2005-05-22 19:27:35 [hometext] => This is a poem about going to my shrink's office every week. The name of the hospital is St. Joseph Mercy. [bodytext] => Saint Joseph Mercy

Every corner is empty
Everywhere is empty
But I still feel touched
The bronze walls so cold at first
Quickly turn hot and disturbing
It's lonely here
Even the tiny squarrel agrees
But he's lucky enough to get away
Anywhere I go, they will find me
Stargazing could never happen
Pollution favors my space
Though I long to escape
No way pure to do so
My heart races upon entering
Passing the old familiar psychiatric palace
Her eyes
God, it's always her eyes
Saint Joseph, who are you?
What is your duty?
A saint
See, laughter somewhat fills the void
Purgatory
We are one in the same
She says she will never see the ones with the bloody skulls
Nor the ones in perfect health
I beg to differ
We're in Purgatory now
Let's Limbo
I'm here, in World War III
The Nazi's symbol is different this time
It's a cross
Soon
Soon, it will be my turn in the camp
Saint Joseph where are you?
I'm not afraid
Wait, I am
Saint Joseph, where is your mercy?
-Amanda Bentley [comments] => 4 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Amanda_Interrupted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 12 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Saint Joseph Mercy

Contributed by Amanda_Interrupted on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:27:35 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Saint Joseph Mercy

Every corner is empty
Everywhere is empty
But I still feel touched
The bronze walls so cold at first
Quickly turn hot and disturbing
It's lonely here
Even the tiny squarrel agrees
But he's lucky enough to get away
Anywhere I go, they will find me
Stargazing could never happen
Pollution favors my space
Though I long to escape
No way pure to do so
My heart races upon entering
Passing the old familiar psychiatric palace
Her eyes
God, it's always her eyes
Saint Joseph, who are you?
What is your duty?
A saint
See, laughter somewhat fills the void
Purgatory
We are one in the same
She says she will never see the ones with the bloody skulls
Nor the ones in perfect health
I beg to differ
We're in Purgatory now
Let's Limbo
I'm here, in World War III
The Nazi's symbol is different this time
It's a cross
Soon
Soon, it will be my turn in the camp
Saint Joseph where are you?
I'm not afraid
Wait, I am
Saint Joseph, where is your mercy?
-Amanda Bentley




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Re: Saint Joseph Mercy (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 07:38:32 PM AEST
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amazing poetry, very sad at the end but i did enjoy reading this
thanku for sharing, it must be very hard to talk about indeed
all my hope XXX


Re: Saint Joseph Mercy (User Rating: 1 )
by kydistortion69 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:18:59 PM AEST
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wonderful poem..has elements of both paranoia and wanten understanding..emotional ..I like this..


Re: Saint Joseph Mercy (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 08:16:36 PM AEST
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Good write. Could feel your journey through this antiseptic place. Peace to you, Laura


Re: Saint Joseph Mercy (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Saturday, 3rd December 2005 @ 08:19:03 PM AEST
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Good write. Could feel your journey through this antiseptic place. Peace to you, Laura




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