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Array ( [sid] => 95393 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crying On the Inside [time] => 2005-05-22 20:42:59 [hometext] => She cries hard, she cries a lot, yet there are no tears and her face is still dry.... [bodytext] => The girl sheds no tears
But that doesn’t mean she’s not crying
On the inside she is weeping
Because she is slowly dying
No one sees her cry
Because it’s on the inside
She cries because it’s all gone
She has no one to be beside
No one to stand next to
No one for her to lean on
They all left her
Even her best friend, Jon*
There’s no shoulder to cry on
No person to talk to
She hates to admit it
But it’s true
She has no friends
The only thing to do is cry
But where they can’t see her
So she cries on the inside

* Name changed to fit and not let people know who left her.
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Crying On the Inside

Contributed by sprinter27 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:42:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The girl sheds no tears
But that doesn’t mean she’s not crying
On the inside she is weeping
Because she is slowly dying
No one sees her cry
Because it’s on the inside
She cries because it’s all gone
She has no one to be beside
No one to stand next to
No one for her to lean on
They all left her
Even her best friend, Jon*
There’s no shoulder to cry on
No person to talk to
She hates to admit it
But it’s true
She has no friends
The only thing to do is cry
But where they can’t see her
So she cries on the inside

* Name changed to fit and not let people know who left her.

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Re: Crying On the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 08:55:37 PM AEST
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beautiful write..
Wishing you best of luck
keep up the great writing
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Crying On the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 09:05:26 PM AEST
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verry touching. I liked it.

KEEP WRITIN

Re: Crying On the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by evilfairy on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 02:40:06 AM AEST
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nice work...sad :(

i like the repetitive 'on the inside'
could be reworked as a song...has that style to it

Re: Crying On the Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:12:39 PM AEST
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a well written poem. is it too late to mend these fences? i suppose i don't know what i'm talking about, but i would rather you be smiling instead of crying.

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