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Unexpected Visitor
Contributed by
Loche
on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 07:06:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The wind gently passes through my hair
whispers only as loud as faint
I stop for what seems eterinty
only to make what is unheard
shivers down my spine
alert and focused
yet nothing revieling
parting clouds above
the moon bright and full
silence takes over
a path of fallen leaves
I stumble upon an old dead tree
blood falling from benieth
the earth trembles before me
faint whispers now clear
smoke begins to elude from the shadows
a bodily figure arises
Cloaked in darkness
A voice so tranquil and that of beauty
In a trance and asphyxiated
My blood begins to throb
hir turned out to be a woman
A woman I have never seen before
Dark and long shinny hair
pale and cold to the touch
Black cloak and a blood red dress
she begins to seduce me
licking my lips with her tongue
'til I had a bulge below
light kisses on my neck
my life now lies in her hands
gripping my neck with her sharp teeth
slowly, blood begins to extract
I start feeling drowzy and week
enough to send me to my knees
Images appear in my head
of a place of immortality
no death but drawn to death
I grasp onto what mortality I had left
Only to feel hunger
As I opened my eyes
my blood dripping from her mouth
deep, dark, but beatuful eyes
For the first time I felt alive
a sudden strange mist surfaces
left me without a hint
An end only to start a new...
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Loche
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2005-05-23 19:06:35]
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Re: Unexpected Visitor
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by Loche on
Friday, 10th June 2005 @ 06:10:50 PM AEST
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I'm not intending to call a lot of people dumb, but the fact is.. the world is full of 'em. Any how, this poem is about being seduced by a female vampire.. which in the end.. the person being seduced.. well, becomes one. One person stated to me that this poem was "erotic trash". I think that person missed the entire meaning.. or, do you people think the same way.. it is erotic trash. If so, let me know..
I know, posting a comment on your own poem is not really something people do.. but, I could not find an edit button anywhere to save my life..
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