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Array ( [sid] => 95523 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => insane [time] => 2005-05-23 20:27:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Not safe in my head
words snap through my mind
images splattered there
turn my life upside down

Supposidly safe
a dark place to hide
but mine's intruded by thoughts
and pictures that blind

All of the fears of the world
linger darlky with in
hiding and spooking
flashing evil grins

can't run,can't hide
so afraid to shut my eyes
I know what lies there
all the creatures from hell

All the monsters and bad guys
from every story told
all are here waiting
how many? who knows?

peer out of the darknes
beshrieking their foes
show me their faces
and there missions unfold

here to haungt, here to hold
slowly drivng me insane
can't escape them, don't know what to do
tell the whole mental house? or wait it all through [comments] => 5 [counter] => 207 [topic] => 75 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

insane

Contributed by spazz911 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:27:38 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

Not safe in my head
words snap through my mind
images splattered there
turn my life upside down

Supposidly safe
a dark place to hide
but mine's intruded by thoughts
and pictures that blind

All of the fears of the world
linger darlky with in
hiding and spooking
flashing evil grins

can't run,can't hide
so afraid to shut my eyes
I know what lies there
all the creatures from hell

All the monsters and bad guys
from every story told
all are here waiting
how many? who knows?

peer out of the darknes
beshrieking their foes
show me their faces
and there missions unfold

here to haungt, here to hold
slowly drivng me insane
can't escape them, don't know what to do
tell the whole mental house? or wait it all through

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-05-23 20:27:38]
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Re: insane (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:31:53 PM AEST
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Took courage tt write such a poem and then post it, great job spazz, this is a poem, if I had the ability to write I would have wrote, thanks, my thoughts to haunt me many times, and I too have poems about them, and plan soon to post them, so keep an eye open for them,
Tammi

Re: insane (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 08:44:26 PM AEST
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interesting write. i dont know what to say bout it tho... umm idk. im stumped. just speechless.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: insane (User Rating: 1 )
by kydistortion69 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 09:27:27 PM AEST
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I like the poem ..pure schizophrenia..good poem..

Re: insane (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:31:32 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: insane (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:48:04 PM AEST
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KC, it is so sad to see you like this. I'm not sure what demons are haunting you like this, but I hope there is someone you can talk to who can help. If my life is any example, all I can say is don't overanalyze. Sometimes I see demons that aren't there. My fears get the better of me and I imagine terrible situations, and I am often making mountains out of mole hills. I am not saying that is the case with you, but if it is, try and step back, take it slow and put in perspective (sorry, the parent in me talking). A lot of these demons in your life may be plain losers and they are probably not even worth your attention. You are a really nice kid who doesn't deserve this kind of cr*p from others.

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