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Array ( [sid] => 9572 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => make me something [time] => 2003-01-01 10:00:00 [hometext] => when i feel like crap.. [bodytext] => tears in time; make me something
my person is so very much linging
love is so hidden away
its raining inside; make me something
for them, always so true and pure
smells of darkness falling upon
no cries, no pain; make me something
stares of upset hearts, continue
cant life wonder somewhere else
little things cry golden tears; make me something
whys and wants for undone needs
looking for something so cold, so hard
lights and stars of them; make me something
no sense in this, send me away
why and my person will never be told
eyes behind the glass; make me something
ring it up, prices of my person
what i love and have wanted
death calls me, shut out; make me something
creeps find it inside, interrupted
total taste of nothing fatal
powder shaken down evily; make me something
stopped, frozen and all gray
balls and shapes of unjust
pinches or more of joy; make me something [comments] => 4 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 13 [informant] => rustygrl33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

make me something

Contributed by rustygrl33 on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

tears in time; make me something
my person is so very much linging
love is so hidden away
its raining inside; make me something
for them, always so true and pure
smells of darkness falling upon
no cries, no pain; make me something
stares of upset hearts, continue
cant life wonder somewhere else
little things cry golden tears; make me something
whys and wants for undone needs
looking for something so cold, so hard
lights and stars of them; make me something
no sense in this, send me away
why and my person will never be told
eyes behind the glass; make me something
ring it up, prices of my person
what i love and have wanted
death calls me, shut out; make me something
creeps find it inside, interrupted
total taste of nothing fatal
powder shaken down evily; make me something
stopped, frozen and all gray
balls and shapes of unjust
pinches or more of joy; make me something

Copyright © rustygrl33 ... [ 2003-01-01 10:00:00]
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Re: make me something (User Rating: 1 )
by darkmind on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 01:43:35 PM AEST
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good poem

Re: make me something (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 03:23:51 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful...i have not read a poem that's stirred up as many emotions as this in a long time...god, i love this...

Re: make me something (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 06:59:27 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was pretty good although it was hard to understand sometimes. i can relate to some of this.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: make me something (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 5th May 2003 @ 04:26:32 AM AEST
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great write

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