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Array ( [sid] => 9573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Why did you do it? [time] => 2003-01-01 10:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why did you rip my heart out on the floor,
Take away what I wanted,
Leave me to die,
How could you chose her over me?
How could she let it happen?
How, how, how?
The only question I ask myself everyday,
I loved him, and love him still,
but yet you don't even give a *****,
You won't barely talk to me anymore,
What the hell is your problem,
Why don't you ***** care?
I love you, yet all you do is push me away,
You act like I am nothing,
I am not a person?
Is that what you try to tell me,
How can you say this about me,
I was your friend long before you had you looks or before you met her,
I cared about you for your personality,
Not for how you looked,
Your looks now,
They mean less to me than before,
I only cared for you, for us,
Our friendship that never seems to matter,
When will it matter?
How can it matter when you won't give me the chance?
I wonder why?
Was it something I said, or something I did,
what did I do to deserve this?
Why, why, why?
I constantly ask myself,
Just tell me what to do,
Tell me what to say,
Just tell me something that I can do to make it okay,
But you ripped my heart out,
you killed all my pride,
how could you do that?
what were you thinking?
Tell me,
I am a man at heart,
I can handle it. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 202 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Dark_Angel_BabAy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Why did you do it?

Contributed by Dark_Angel_BabAy on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why did you rip my heart out on the floor,
Take away what I wanted,
Leave me to die,
How could you chose her over me?
How could she let it happen?
How, how, how?
The only question I ask myself everyday,
I loved him, and love him still,
but yet you don't even give a *****,
You won't barely talk to me anymore,
What the hell is your problem,
Why don't you ***** care?
I love you, yet all you do is push me away,
You act like I am nothing,
I am not a person?
Is that what you try to tell me,
How can you say this about me,
I was your friend long before you had you looks or before you met her,
I cared about you for your personality,
Not for how you looked,
Your looks now,
They mean less to me than before,
I only cared for you, for us,
Our friendship that never seems to matter,
When will it matter?
How can it matter when you won't give me the chance?
I wonder why?
Was it something I said, or something I did,
what did I do to deserve this?
Why, why, why?
I constantly ask myself,
Just tell me what to do,
Tell me what to say,
Just tell me something that I can do to make it okay,
But you ripped my heart out,
you killed all my pride,
how could you do that?
what were you thinking?
Tell me,
I am a man at heart,
I can handle it.




Copyright © Dark_Angel_BabAy ... [ 2003-01-01 10:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Why did you do it? (User Rating: 1 )
by gina on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 12:28:52 PM AEST
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dont they all do that 4 no reason , leave u to discover the conclusion all by urself , but i actually know y , its bcoz they'r all fake and heartless , that's y
good write my friend


Re: Why did you do it? (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 06:41:18 PM AEST
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This was a very sad poem. I to ask myself that question. Why? I liked this poem a lot thanks for sharing it. Not all guys are cruel and heartless lots of girls have hurt me it happens both ways. I am sry for your loss.

Bobo (Joel)




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