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always try to give and give
but where it gets me I don't know
surely like to tell you where you could go.
~*~

If I knew then what I know now
wouldn't have joined that debate no how
I went in there with an open mind
and found that there its cool to be unkind.
~*~

I put my heart and soul in all I do, though
tonight your words cut through and through
ohhhhhhhhh what the hell it was last year
and now's a new one, starts right here.
~*~

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I try

Contributed by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I try to live and let live
always try to give and give
but where it gets me I don't know
surely like to tell you where you could go.
~*~

If I knew then what I know now
wouldn't have joined that debate no how
I went in there with an open mind
and found that there its cool to be unkind.
~*~

I put my heart and soul in all I do, though
tonight your words cut through and through
ohhhhhhhhh what the hell it was last year
and now's a new one, starts right here.
~*~

Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-01-01 11:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I try (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 06:37:18 PM AEST
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I liked this one to... I can't help but feel i have something to do with you writing these poems. If thats the case I am very sorry.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: I try (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 04:00:44 PM AEST
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go girl, give it all you got, cos you've got lots to give

Re: I try (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Friday, 3rd January 2003 @ 05:32:04 PM AEST
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You write with depth and insights that are awesome, Lady Fawn. I like your writing style very much.

Re: I try (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 09:20:57 PM AEST
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i like the rythym of the poem if i got the rythym you intended if any... im not good at analyzing poetry maybe you could help me

Re: I try (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:18:23 PM AEST
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I can tell by the last couple of poems, that something was peeving you off. I can feel the anger in this write Nessa. *S* Cynthia

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