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i float through the stream
this dream that gets hotter
soon tears at the seam

pluck me from rage
the waters of white
my future's a stage
that won't let me fight

like a rose wilting slow
i stare at the trees
rows upon rows
leaves fall unto me

save me from sorrow
a pin pushing heart
please no tomorrow
i don't wanna start...

...another day without her....

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A rose on the water

Contributed by In_a_While on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:58:55 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

like a rose on the water
i float through the stream
this dream that gets hotter
soon tears at the seam

pluck me from rage
the waters of white
my future's a stage
that won't let me fight

like a rose wilting slow
i stare at the trees
rows upon rows
leaves fall unto me

save me from sorrow
a pin pushing heart
please no tomorrow
i don't wanna start...

...another day without her....

Copyright Â© In_a_While ... [ 2005-05-26 09:58:55]
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Re: A rose on the water (User Rating: 1 )
by kylie on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:21:08 AM AEST
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LOVE IT GOOD JOB! Sad but honest. Remember things get worse before they get better. hang in there. kylie

Re: A rose on the water (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:19:58 AM AEST
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A wonderful, but sad romantic write, which seems to focus on love lost. I really like the flow(no pun intended)and rhythum of this poem.

Good job

Will

Re: A rose on the water (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 11:42:27 AM AEST
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Now this was a great right dw. It flows so well and truly was a flawless write my friend. Your talent never stop amazing me. You are a great writer and event though there is so much pain in these words and I know how it feels to miss someone this much it was still beautifully put together. Keep up the good work I look forward to more. Sorry I’ve been gone for so long life over here has been crazy….Steve

Re: A rose on the water (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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this was very good. It was well written. It was sad and honest and really shows that you love this person..

X+X christina X+X

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