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Array ( [sid] => 95838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => If I could I would [time] => 2005-05-26 13:09:09 [hometext] => I've got two friends whom I care about dearly, I even think I might have feelings for the guy, but he likes her and I'm ok with that... in fact this is how ok I really am... [bodytext] => If I could make things right I would
I'd make them fall for eachother
And make it so it left no scars
On the hearts of all the others

If I could fix the world I would
So they could be together
I'd do it here and now
I'd face the storms they'd have to weather

If I could bend the laws of love I would
Make these two hearts united
And make everyone see the same
No points of view divided

If I could make them happy I would
Just to see them smile
And though it would cause my heart pain
I'd forget after a while [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

If I could I would

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:09:09 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

If I could make things right I would
I'd make them fall for eachother
And make it so it left no scars
On the hearts of all the others

If I could fix the world I would
So they could be together
I'd do it here and now
I'd face the storms they'd have to weather

If I could bend the laws of love I would
Make these two hearts united
And make everyone see the same
No points of view divided

If I could make them happy I would
Just to see them smile
And though it would cause my heart pain
I'd forget after a while

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-05-26 13:09:09]
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Re: If I could I would (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:13:21 PM AEST
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Awww.Kiela...

This is so sweet, and it's so sad, yet so lovely of you to be willing to sacrifice your own desires for a friend.

You are a good friend, Kiela. I hope they know that.

This is a lovely poem hun, I hope you feel a lot better soon.

*hugs tons and tons*
Phil xxx

Re: If I could I would (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 01:36:20 PM AEST
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That was a great write! Its amazing that even though you have feelings for the guy, you are willing to make them happy. I hope this girl know how lucky she is to have a great friend like you at her side.

Keep writing
keep smiling

Re: If I could I would (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 04:10:25 PM AEST
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This is so nice, but heartbreakingly so...Kie you are eternally sweet, always thinking of others, but it wouldn't be bad to look out for yourself once in awhile too....Don't worry; love never lets sweet people like you stay single...; ) *hugs* Scorp.

Re: If I could I would (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 10:32:40 PM AEST
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your a great lady kie a great writter 2 bad there weren't more like u and at such a young age, u got character kid not 2 mention courage, proud 2 call u a friend any day . . .

Dorian Chambers

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