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Array ( [sid] => 9600 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => a familys Prayer [time] => 2003-01-02 00:00:00 [hometext] => I wish my family could read this,,,before it's to late,,, [bodytext] => I want to visit my family,,unable too,,
some family members,,don't get along with,,
I wish it was possible,,unable to happen,,
I blame myself,,it was my fault,,

no words thrown,,hatefully,,
parents trying to understand why,,no questions asked,,
we,, the family knows,,
and still I blame myself,,

I ask GOD for help,,
put them in his hands,,
God understands why,,
their still in his hands,,

I love my family open heartly,,
I gave my brother a kidney for life,,
we now talk as one,,family,,
god saved his life,,for me to know,,

I thank you my Heavenly Father,,
for the gift you gave me,,
two more,to go ,,
Their still in your hands,,

Father please hear my prayer,,
I dont want my family to come together,,
Because of deaths,,,
Please Father before it's to late,,

Please ,, Hear my Prayer,,,
craig s. meeks [comments] => 5 [counter] => 550 [topic] => 23 [informant] => SPOOKY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

a familys Prayer

Contributed by SPOOKY on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

I want to visit my family,,unable too,,
some family members,,don't get along with,,
I wish it was possible,,unable to happen,,
I blame myself,,it was my fault,,

no words thrown,,hatefully,,
parents trying to understand why,,no questions asked,,
we,, the family knows,,
and still I blame myself,,

I ask GOD for help,,
put them in his hands,,
God understands why,,
their still in his hands,,

I love my family open heartly,,
I gave my brother a kidney for life,,
we now talk as one,,family,,
god saved his life,,for me to know,,

I thank you my Heavenly Father,,
for the gift you gave me,,
two more,to go ,,
Their still in your hands,,

Father please hear my prayer,,
I dont want my family to come together,,
Because of deaths,,,
Please Father before it's to late,,

Please ,, Hear my Prayer,,,
craig s. meeks

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Re: a familys Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 01:42:39 AM AEST
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Wow spooky ! you are really great...you gave a kidney for life. I am really really feel sory for your family. so sad.may Lord hear your prayer I Share your feelings. Thank you friend..Venkat

Re: a familys Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 02:00:51 AM AEST
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Hi Craig, I hope this problem sorts itself out soon..I know what family means to me..and I get the feeling it dos to you too.. Hope the New Year brings the solution to your problem.
Hugs, Jenni

Re: a familys Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:28:02 AM AEST
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Aww Craig what a wonderful beautiful thing you did for your brother....Your heart is so big my friend and so full of love ....please don't be so hard upon yourself ...a persons heart will light the way of where they need their souls to stay, and if you run across bad words then be strong my friend , do not blurt....words will scorn and hurt the soul and keep one blaming himself for years told...*hugs* i hope all works out for you and your family, may peace lay upon your beautiful soul my friend...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:.

Re: a familys Prayer (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:35:39 AM AEST
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Nicely written. Why dont you send all your family members a copy of this through the mail? Maybe it would open the lines of communication. Who knows, it's a start.

Re: a familys Prayer (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:50:04 AM AEST
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Craig,family is so important & I know they will come through! Your words are so touching & caring they really need to see this! Good one! Christina

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