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Array ( [sid] => 96044 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => why is God laughing at me? [time] => 2005-05-28 08:26:58 [hometext] => [bodytext] => you say god loves me
that he loves me and you
and nothing will change that
no matter what we do

you say that he just wants us happy
that being with you isnt a sin
but i feel like cause i was with you and happy
his torture is for what im in

i knew that this would happen
that you were just too good to be true
and i think that deep down inside
you knew it would happen too

so tell me, if god loves me so much
even more than you said you loved me
then why does it feel like now that im miserable again
that he's up there laughing up me?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato [comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

why is God laughing at me?

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 08:26:58 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

you say god loves me
that he loves me and you
and nothing will change that
no matter what we do

you say that he just wants us happy
that being with you isnt a sin
but i feel like cause i was with you and happy
his torture is for what im in

i knew that this would happen
that you were just too good to be true
and i think that deep down inside
you knew it would happen too

so tell me, if god loves me so much
even more than you said you loved me
then why does it feel like now that im miserable again
that he's up there laughing up me?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-28 08:26:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: why is God laughing at me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:39:22 AM AEST
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awww dont ever say gods laughing at you.
Because beyond anything God do love you.
Thats why Jesus died and paid for our sins so we all could go to heaven.
have faith hugs

Re: why is God laughing at me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 12:29:51 AM AEST
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So well written. Nice work.

Re: why is God laughing at me? (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 10:09:26 AM AEST
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Very nice write the ending didn't quite flow but I enjoyed the thought and the piece.

--amanda--

Re: why is God laughing at me? (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_noel09 on Sunday, 4th December 2005 @ 05:21:29 PM AEST
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awww...I am soo sorry! I know what it's like to think you know someone and then find out you don't...but I promise you God is not up there laughing at you! God is the one drying your tears and patting your back. -hugs- nice write

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