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Array ( [sid] => 9613 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° [time] => 2003-01-02 09:00:00 [hometext] => This was written due to a past real life experience of mine that i had right after the WTC fell, It has to be written in a sequal because it's a poem that tells a story...it's a mixture of 3 things that i was going through at this time in my life. I wanted to help those in need even though they were refusing any more help than they already had, I was trying to let the man of my life know that through all the sadness that he was surrounded by that i was there for him as he had written me a suicide letter, and in the middle of me being their the things i learned about life, feelings, and humanity will stay with me until the very day i die... [bodytext] => I took a trip once for my true love in life
And to help those in need at a terrible time
He scared me with suicide letters he dared
So i drove to Manhattan with my love and care

.*.

The view on the trip was a beautiful sight
I never seen leaves red, green, brown, yellow bright
The colors that splashed on the highway's dark side
Were then covered with darkness and cold rainy nights

.*.

When i arrived there were cold busy streets
And a wall full of beautiful painted graffiti
I tried to look deep in it's colors so bold
And feel the deep pain of the pictures unfold

.*.

I then saw a woman on cold wet concrete
She was laying alone with her pants to her knees
She knew i was there as she slowed down her breath
So i got her some help , she'd almost reached her death

.*.

I saw an old lady with no shoes to wear
I took mine off for her to show her i care
I gave my shoes off my feet for hers so bare
And my soul it sang melodies while i was there

.*.

I walked a bit farther to find Central Park
Where i knew i'd be sitting outside in the dark
I sat at the place i told him that i'd be
I watched all the people walk right on past me

.*.

The rich offered money for new shoes to wear
And the homeless they gave me their food to share
Most everyone says that New Yorker's are mean
But they showed me some kindness that i've never seen...

.*.

The spiritual feelings that came over me
Will forever stay deep in in my heart that bleeds
I waited for true love to show me his face
And he walked right upon me with beauty and grace

.*.

I sat there and i knew he had his own pride
I stood up and looked at him right in the eyes
The depth of my love made him run from my sight
He chose our true love's destiny that very night


To be continued.....


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°°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°°

Contributed by OreO on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



I took a trip once for my true love in life
And to help those in need at a terrible time
He scared me with suicide letters he dared
So i drove to Manhattan with my love and care

.*.

The view on the trip was a beautiful sight
I never seen leaves red, green, brown, yellow bright
The colors that splashed on the highway's dark side
Were then covered with darkness and cold rainy nights

.*.

When i arrived there were cold busy streets
And a wall full of beautiful painted graffiti
I tried to look deep in it's colors so bold
And feel the deep pain of the pictures unfold

.*.

I then saw a woman on cold wet concrete
She was laying alone with her pants to her knees
She knew i was there as she slowed down her breath
So i got her some help , she'd almost reached her death

.*.

I saw an old lady with no shoes to wear
I took mine off for her to show her i care
I gave my shoes off my feet for hers so bare
And my soul it sang melodies while i was there

.*.

I walked a bit farther to find Central Park
Where i knew i'd be sitting outside in the dark
I sat at the place i told him that i'd be
I watched all the people walk right on past me

.*.

The rich offered money for new shoes to wear
And the homeless they gave me their food to share
Most everyone says that New Yorker's are mean
But they showed me some kindness that i've never seen...

.*.

The spiritual feelings that came over me
Will forever stay deep in in my heart that bleeds
I waited for true love to show me his face
And he walked right upon me with beauty and grace

.*.

I sat there and i knew he had his own pride
I stood up and looked at him right in the eyes
The depth of my love made him run from my sight
He chose our true love's destiny that very night


To be continued.....






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Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:09:56 AM AEST
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WOW!!!!! I can't wait for part two excellent write brought tears to my eyes

Shari


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:21:28 AM AEST
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Truely wonderful poem. I will think of this poem when I think things in my life are overwelming.

Mike


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 09:34:34 AM AEST
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Oreo, WOW very touching write,I really got lost in to it! Cant wait for the other part! Great peice here.Christina


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by juliette on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:54:57 AM AEST
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Wonderful poem, Oreo and I too am waiting for part 2!
Thanks for sharing!
*juliette


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 03:00:06 PM AEST
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This is a very sweet poem. It should remind us all of how this world really should be. I have a few poems myself I wrote about this tragic event. There are a couple I haven't put in yet, but you will get to see them. Happy New Year my friend. Thanx for all the great comments on my poems. *S* Cynthia


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by spooky on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 06:29:49 PM AEST
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beautiful;ly written,,,hope to read part two,,,
thank you for your comment,it meant so much to me,,,spooky


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by thorns on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 07:21:40 PM AEST
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it's tough when someone close to you threatens suicide. my fiance says he'd kill himself if i were to die; that scares me. i guess he means "I can't live without you" or soemthing, but i just hear him saying he wants to hurt himself.


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Panther_1978 on Thursday, 2nd January 2003 @ 11:18:13 PM AEST
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What a great poem OreO!!! It almost brung me to tears but great write... I too want to read the 2nd & 3rd set of poems! Thank you for sharing :)

Panther


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 4th January 2003 @ 06:02:10 PM AEST
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Aww.... I really like this one, and I'm heading over to the second.....

YS


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Mystery_Girl on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 01:12:28 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed this and what a journey.....will skip over to read part two.....a good write.........tanya...:-)


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by mandy091706187 on Tuesday, 7th January 2003 @ 01:04:50 PM AEST
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5.... I gotta read tha second NOW!!!


Re: °°°Mirrored Destiny-1°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:22:58 AM AEST
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As you have very well seen, that no soul is ever really alone. But sometimes you must take the time and effort to look and see. especially in these hurried times in which we all live.

A very good read,
wordsy.




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