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Array ( [sid] => 96222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Passion Nevermore [time] => 2005-05-29 23:46:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => We woke, the sun was in the sky
and the face of Heaven was there..
but silence all about us lie
that morning in the air.

I asked your love: "Where have you been
since the sun set in the west?
I know not where your feet have gone,
nor what has been your quest.

Where were you when Orion passed
below the land and sea?
For all the distant stars are gone...
You've followed them for me?

Where have you been.. nepenthe-
since tides upon the shore?
You've gently rocked our love to sleep
in passion nevermore.

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Passion Nevermore

Contributed by Man_On_High on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:46:35 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

We woke, the sun was in the sky
and the face of Heaven was there..
but silence all about us lie
that morning in the air.

I asked your love: "Where have you been
since the sun set in the west?
I know not where your feet have gone,
nor what has been your quest.

Where were you when Orion passed
below the land and sea?
For all the distant stars are gone...
You've followed them for me?

Where have you been.. nepenthe-
since tides upon the shore?
You've gently rocked our love to sleep
in passion nevermore.

M.O.H.

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2005-05-29 23:46:35]
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Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 29th May 2005 @ 11:52:07 PM AEST
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wow another good write.
huggs,
emy

Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 12:09:41 AM AEST
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Ypur talent is extraordinary. Has the flavor of Poe to me, or maybe that is the reference to nepenthe which was used in "The Raven". Quaffing nepenthe to forget a lost love. I still think this is brilliant.

Rita

Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:00:23 AM AEST
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Great write MOH.......i really enjoyed reading it. I especially liked the way you put your words together.........rather like a song in question. Was a real fine job of imagery also, I could see so much of it in my mind's eye! Keep up the good work.
Warm love
consue

Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 10:17:59 AM AEST
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Boy did i feel this hurting as i am right now

u deffinately nailed it with one, the last line

touched me in in the heart as well as the gut .

very effective, well done . . .

Benedetto John Papa

Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 02:19:28 PM AEST
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beautiful in its heartbreak; simply exquisite... hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Passion Nevermore (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 02:03:10 PM AEST
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see billy, someone else said poe. =] of course the nevermore part made me think of him this time around. you have talent and you are making good use of it, with each post you seem to grow to where amazing poems are always written. this was my favorite part,
"For all the distant stars are gone...
You've followed them for me?"

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