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I’m left wandering in the night
You closed all doors and windows
Now I’m stuck with no where to go
I can’t see a thing
And I’m suffering to bring
Air into my body
Thanks a lot, buddy
You’ve made me suffered
You’ve made me shutter
You threw me in here
With all of my tears
I can’t breathe anymore
It has become war
Between me and life
We are caught in this strife
But I know I can’t win this fight
I’m stuck here without the light
There’s no getting out
There’s no doubt
I can’t live much longer
I have not grown any stronger
I’m stuck in the dark
On any other day I love the dark
But not when it
Destroys me bit-by-bit
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Darkness

Contributed by sprinter27 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:35:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You shut off my light
I’m left wandering in the night
You closed all doors and windows
Now I’m stuck with no where to go
I can’t see a thing
And I’m suffering to bring
Air into my body
Thanks a lot, buddy
You’ve made me suffered
You’ve made me shutter
You threw me in here
With all of my tears
I can’t breathe anymore
It has become war
Between me and life
We are caught in this strife
But I know I can’t win this fight
I’m stuck here without the light
There’s no getting out
There’s no doubt
I can’t live much longer
I have not grown any stronger
I’m stuck in the dark
On any other day I love the dark
But not when it
Destroys me bit-by-bit

Copyright Â© sprinter27 ... [ 2005-05-30 20:35:49]
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Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:57:43 PM AEST
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The darkness can be hell, and you just described it very well here, good writing sprinter.

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 08:58:48 PM AEST
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i like the dark too sprints... and if it destroys me so be it. the darkness is everywhere... and unfortunatly we cant escape it. we must embrace it, face our fears. stay strong, sprints,
jennie*

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 09:11:54 PM AEST
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Darkness is always here, it is inescapable. But I would love it if you and Jennie wouldn't turn so headlong into it! There is bad; there is also good. I have seen good... from both of you. I see the dark a lot but to not become dominated by it is to turn to the light. Both of you are beacons in this darkness. Maybe you don't see it but, nonetheless, it is true.

Re: Darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by xdeadxdollyx on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 10:26:45 AM AEST
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The dark is the best even though I get so scared of it sometimes.

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