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tangle and deceive
magentic eyes
attraction bound

Road to hell
deposit my blood
relinquish my soul

Web of deception
you spin
taking my breath
grasp, then retreat

Develop my dreams
information absorbed
pick my brain
implant your seed

From my life
you feed
your energy source
i've gave all
my love, now
to my knees, i've
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MY SOUL FOR YOU

Contributed by sweetoccasion29 on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 05:49:16 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Picture of lust
tangle and deceive
magentic eyes
attraction bound

Road to hell
deposit my blood
relinquish my soul

Web of deception
you spin
taking my breath
grasp, then retreat

Develop my dreams
information absorbed
pick my brain
implant your seed

From my life
you feed
your energy source
i've gave all
my love, now
to my knees, i've
surrendered me

Copyright © sweetoccasion29 ... [ 2005-05-31 17:49:16]
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Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:04:55 PM AEST
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nice wording. This was a pleasure to read.

Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:07:37 PM AEST
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Sounds like a lot of sacrifice given 4 love

hope u got as much back , beautiful peice of

writting, deep and touching . . .

Ben

aka. Dorian Chambers

Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:42:03 PM AEST
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"Pick my brain, implant your seed..." Awesome line. Well done.
Scorp.

Re: MY SOUL FOR YOU (User Rating: 1 )
by seriphsoul on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 09:19:29 PM AEST
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Sounds like youd do anyhting for this person, very well written.

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