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Array ( [sid] => 96409 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => mommy please know i love you(final copy) [time] => 2005-05-31 19:19:02 [hometext] => lat time i accidently posted to rough draft instead of the finnished copy [bodytext] => Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
For your guidance I do seek

I need you so please remember
When we don’t seem to get along
And when you feel taken over by anger
I’ll love you my whole life long

It may not always seem that I love you
But mommy know I do
Because I’ll always be “your baby”
Even when harsh emotions seem to brew

But please know when it’s time to let go
For you can’t hold on forever
Although it may be tempting
You have to if you love your daughter

So Mommy I really do need you
But that’s not to say I can’t stand on my own
All I ask is you let go when its time
And leave me be to grow

To grow into the young woman
That you truly want me to be
A woman that can stand on her own two feet
But first you must set me free

So Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
But give me space to breathe
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mommy please know i love you(final copy)

Contributed by allymp on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:19:02 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
For your guidance I do seek

I need you so please remember
When we don’t seem to get along
And when you feel taken over by anger
I’ll love you my whole life long

It may not always seem that I love you
But mommy know I do
Because I’ll always be “your baby”
Even when harsh emotions seem to brew

But please know when it’s time to let go
For you can’t hold on forever
Although it may be tempting
You have to if you love your daughter

So Mommy I really do need you
But that’s not to say I can’t stand on my own
All I ask is you let go when its time
And leave me be to grow

To grow into the young woman
That you truly want me to be
A woman that can stand on her own two feet
But first you must set me free

So Mommy please know I love you
You make my life complete
Mommy never leave me
But give me space to breathe

Copyright Â© allymp ... [ 2005-05-31 19:19:02]
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Re: mommy please know i love you(final copy) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:58:04 PM AEST
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Very good writing.
I know from experience it's hard to let go.
keep writing and luving your mom. I'm sure she'll be understanding as by this write one can see she raised a beautifull, caring young lady.
huggs,
emy

Re: mommy please know i love you(final copy) (User Rating: 1 )
by seriphsoul on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 11:03:22 PM AEST
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Well, at least you have a good relationship with your mother. Yeah, they don't like to let go, its like prying them off with a crow bar! But its a wonderful poem!

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