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TWILIGHT ZONE
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 04:13:09 AM in AEST
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Come with me
into the Twilight Zone
These are the things
that surround me.....
I'm never alone!
!TWILIGHT ZONE!
Remember my pal Rod?
A program on the TV
left your imagination awed!!!
I loved the !Twilight Zone!.....
For my imagination, I've
never outgrown.
Last night we had a big flood.
Huge mud puddles sighted,
Frogs a' crockin' Fish a' jumpin'
Ants a' raftin' birds a' drippin'
AND, I have NOT been nippin!
'Tis the !Twilight Zone!
I put my imagination on loan....
Oh, My......wish you could see
What I see almost daily.
Upside down opossum a' jitterbuggin'
Swinging high, so low a' hangin'
My duck is a' quackin'
"Afleck, Afleck," he's a' yellin'
The ole Oak is a' swingin'
It's Acorns a' twirling 'n a' singin'
I know this isn't for a' real?
I know this frog ain't an' actual!
I can't prove the trout is a' factual?
It's me I hear as I a' chuckle!
The trout is a' splashin'
With each jump he's a'yellin"
"Frog! Leave your hat on!"
"Tis plain to see the Frog is long gone!!!
I have these episodes often,
My imagination is n'er barren!
Sometimes it takes me to the brink.....
And then you wonder why I drink?
Created by
Lovingcritters
Consue
May 31, 2005
"Poetry is the art of creating
imaginary gardens
with real toads."
~ Marianne Moore quotes~
American poet, 1887-1972
"Froggy Jumpin' Smiles"
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 06:05:39 AM AEST
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I liked twilight zone also
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:30:54 AM AEST
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| Nice tribute to Nessie. Top marks as usual from bernard. |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by SPSM on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 07:31:08 AM AEST
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| This is the cutest poem. I love the twilight zone. And, truly if I saw all that I'd be a drinking too....Great....SharonM |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:37:11 AM AEST
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ConSue, i adore the "Twilight Zone". i've been a fan since forever.
I love the pics and the words, what a wonderful tribute to Nessa.
Jane xx |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:02:43 AM AEST
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ha! good fun connie girl, all of your lill critters make this poem simply adorable:) and i love that quote by marianne moore, ..its a sweet thing you do lady, bringing sunshine into the lives of so many, thank you for warming this heart...
big hugs n' love nessa
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 12:13:50 PM AEST
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| lol I absolutely loved it my kind of humour,,lol |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by MorningDove on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 06:14:50 PM AEST
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this is just too cute. i am a frog lover from way back when. my favorite are the tree frogs but i love them all just the same. great write. good going, nessa.
rita |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by Man_On_High on
Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 10:00:00 PM AEST
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this was brilliant on so many levels...
I love the "shattered" feeling the composition has..
yet it flows...
one of my favorites thus far!
I loved this-
B |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 2nd June 2005 @ 01:56:55 PM AEST
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I loved the twilight zone also Sue
Fantastic write
Thanks for the smiles
love Angelxxx |
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Re: TWILIGHT ZONE
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by emystar on
Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 05:45:32 AM AEST
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wow!
u got it goin on mom.
huggs, smiles, luv,
yobrat,
emy |
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