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Array ( [sid] => 96479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Freezing Point [time] => 2005-06-01 11:25:30 [hometext] => Even though Im screaming in my head, people still think I'm just as well dead [bodytext] => The hate within wont go away,
Why did these feelings surface today?
I thought life was so well,
My feelings just fell.
Suddenly, quickly, rough.
I finally thought life wasn't so tough.
But the pain within my chest
Just wont give me a goddamned rest.
F*ck hear me scream out.
Reality hears my silence, no doubt.
Shivers, not from the warming sun,
Life has gotten a little no fun.
Just please look inside, feel the pain
Hiding my tears in the rain
You think we feel the same.
Just to let you know,
Its on the outside that I'm faking a show.
It's raingin inside, thats freezing to snow.

Kate Ecklund
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 245 [topic] => 6 [informant] => suicidal_imbecile [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Freezing Point

Contributed by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 11:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

The hate within wont go away,
Why did these feelings surface today?
I thought life was so well,
My feelings just fell.
Suddenly, quickly, rough.
I finally thought life wasn't so tough.
But the pain within my chest
Just wont give me a goddamned rest.
F*ck hear me scream out.
Reality hears my silence, no doubt.
Shivers, not from the warming sun,
Life has gotten a little no fun.
Just please look inside, feel the pain
Hiding my tears in the rain
You think we feel the same.
Just to let you know,
Its on the outside that I'm faking a show.
It's raingin inside, thats freezing to snow.

Kate Ecklund

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Re: Freezing Point (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 19th June 2005 @ 01:28:12 PM AEST
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Not sure why you got know comments on the write it was worded well and flowed well to. It did have a lot of anger and pain in it but that’s what makes it so good. Raw emotions are the best pieces of work to read for it’s the truth from someone’s heart. Love is great but it can blind us and others and make us loss reality and live a fake life. Pain and the bad times in life is when you know that all you write and say is the truth for its all you know. Take care and sorry it took so long for me to see you had one with no comment. Take care Kate your in my thoughts and prayers event though my prayers aren’t very strong anymore. Your friend….Steve

Re: Freezing Point (User Rating: 1 )
by Poser on Friday, 23rd December 2005 @ 12:20:29 AM AEST
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Pretty catchy. I liked it. Thanks for the share. : )

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