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Array ( [sid] => 96945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Terms That Be [time] => 2005-06-05 18:14:05 [hometext] => If you love something, set them free... [bodytext] => Your beauty is renowned
but a model you're not
it's inside your mind
where i think you're hot
I can see your reason
and I understand your thought
to me its true beauty
you're innocent at heart.

your presence overwhelms me
thoughts cannot express
the emotions i feel
i think you're the best
when you are happy...
so am i...
but the truth that scares me...
is if you were to die...

have i become dependant
on your soul so pure?
what do i offer you?
what remedy or cure?

it scares me to think
how happy i could be
but not happy with myself...
just that you are with me

this relationship cannot exist
on the terms that be
You must be let go
so that I can be free

you'll be in my mind
you're my reason for action

it shouldn't take long
now i know what i need
soon i will grow strong
this is my creed
we are two beings
who could never be whole
you give me what i need...
now i want to complete your soul

when I come...
to the terms that be...
i will reclaim you
in our happiness we'll be free
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 2 [informant] => dynamicx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Terms That Be

Contributed by dynamicx on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:14:05 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Your beauty is renowned
but a model you're not
it's inside your mind
where i think you're hot
I can see your reason
and I understand your thought
to me its true beauty
you're innocent at heart.

your presence overwhelms me
thoughts cannot express
the emotions i feel
i think you're the best
when you are happy...
so am i...
but the truth that scares me...
is if you were to die...

have i become dependant
on your soul so pure?
what do i offer you?
what remedy or cure?

it scares me to think
how happy i could be
but not happy with myself...
just that you are with me

this relationship cannot exist
on the terms that be
You must be let go
so that I can be free

you'll be in my mind
you're my reason for action

it shouldn't take long
now i know what i need
soon i will grow strong
this is my creed
we are two beings
who could never be whole
you give me what i need...
now i want to complete your soul

when I come...
to the terms that be...
i will reclaim you
in our happiness we'll be free




Copyright © dynamicx ... [ 2005-06-05 18:14:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Terms That Be (User Rating: 1 )
by AMph on Sunday, 5th June 2005 @ 06:49:25 PM AEST
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Who is the girl? very deep my friend. its good that you know that you, have to get terms with yourself before you can truly experience what you want. I like it!


Re: The Terms That Be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th June 2005 @ 04:18:05 AM AEST
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Very deep masterpeice.
Someone is very lucky to have u or should I say have your affection.
huggs,
emy




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